Run 「走る」 - Comments

Thank you c:

I quite enjoy this concept of cell phone novel, it's refreshing and unique. Yet, with only a few words, you paint a vivid picture for your readers, you managed to pull that off really nicely.

The story touches a sensitive subject: bullying, but doesn't seem to fall under the usual clichés.

The way you write is very fluid, the short sentences going straight to the point make the story easy to read and follow, the vocabulary is simple yet effective.

I like the overall plot, the way these two are connected for something they have in common and how their pain is bringing them close together. I'm subscribing