August 22nd, 2013 at 04:55am
Wow. I absolutely loved this. The way you described things made them feel so raw and real. Like, the emotions and remorse from the protagonist (and their change) was evident in every word. There were a few grammatical errors, but really, it’s nitpicking and the intensity of the story itself makes them irrelevant. Other than that, I honestly have no problem with this. I love it, really, it’s definitely one of my favourites. This comment should be way longer because of how much I enjoyed this, but I'm kind of speechless.
You did a great job, I really enjoyed this
Wow, that is the best news I could receive. Thank you so much, I couldn't ask for a better comment, I'm sat here smiling to myself because I know how hard I worked on this and I feel kinda accomplished. Thank you so much for the honesty again and I hope you have a nice day/night x