The Lion and the Rebel - Comments

@ teenagedream91
4 kids is considerable haha Really? 5? Wow.
I never wore uniforms haha

@ BlueDreams
Four kids is considered a small group well for me anyways lol everyone in my family has at least five kids there are some with fewer but yeah four is nothing. Ah I see. Yeah it depends some public where uniforms. I wore uniforms until I was in high school. I felt so liberated lol
You can definitely see it with Tom and Lucy. Tom might add in a few words when he's around Leona. We'll see

@ teenagedream91
4 kids would be a big party ahha
I just asked because in Portugal, uniforms are just for private schools mostly.
I had that feeling too haha like Tom trying to talk to Leona about it without mentioning it directly haha

@ BlueDreams
He bounces off the wall when he's excited and does that goofy smile we all know and love XD
Yeah they are in uniform I think it's standard over there...I know in some public schools over here in the US there is a uniform here too so it varies.
Yep I was remembered that Paty and Ben were in my story and how many kids they should have. I didn't specify their ages but they are reall close together. The typical number of kids people have is usually to 2-3 if possible four.
You'll see if they all see it or not. Parents usually just it let run its course but they might have something up their sleeve. I feel like Lucy and Tom would be the puppeteers on this one if any lol

@ teenagedream91
Hahaha yes! The twins take a bit after Tom's excitement.
Okay, I was just wondering since they wear uniform right?
Oh my... that's as many children as Tom and Nai haha
My goodness, me too. It was just so weird!
Exactly, usually kids just kind of 'ignore' it until it becomes really obvious.
4 years apart is still a little gap and I wonder if anyone has realized Leona's feeling on the parents area.

@ BlueDreams
I felt like Lucy and Chris would be extra sweet and caring parents especially Lucy after the rift between her and her parents. It is hard like you said being considered like family for so long and to have a crush on someone.
Thank you :) most teens have braces and acne so might as well let her awkwardness start. It usually starts around 13 anyways and i laugh whenever I write about the twins I feel like those two can be like Tom when he's really excited or how he probably was around his age.
I honestly don't know what kind of school they to to lol I just heard that some schools in England have all stages of school compiled into one. They don't go to boarding school. I'm vague about it because I have no idea lol
Yes Benny and Paty have three boys. The boys will play a small role in the story since they are family and look out for one another.
Imagine going on a date like that? Geez I might not be able to handle it at that age then again I probably wouldn't even realize I'm on a date until someone told me lol I was that naive back then.
Berkeley is one of the top public schools in the US. It's killer aka amazing up there.
Isn't it funny and disgusting at the same time when it doesn't apply to you hearing about how parents have sex after having kids haha usually kids don't think thier parents could do such a thing.
Tom says some pretty wise words and foreshadowing too. Like you said they will change as the years go by and when I test started this story I totally forgot that they are four years apart lol I have to keep reminding myself not to go too far when I write until they are older.

@ BlueDreams
No she won't because Leona is born and raised in England. It happens like Andrew Garfield is actually American but he was raised in England so it has an English accent. Leona might have a small Australian accent for being around her father but that's it.
True they would expect a lot from him and to scare the potential bullies or boys that might pursue any of them. It won't last forever but be will try

Lucy and Chris are just so sweet as parents and I feel for Leona. It must be hard to have a crush on someone considered family, who at the same time drifted away on his own account.
I love the fact that Leona isn't perfect like every teenager and the twins are just so adorable haha
Just out of curiosity, what kind of school do they go to?
Wait.. wait... Ben and Paty have three boys? *_________*
Oh poor Leona, this whole date deal must have been nerve-wrecking.
Uhh Asi has good ambitions, Berkeley sounds amazing.
And ahhhh poor children with their parents' sex life hahahaha
Lee, I'm sorry to say but your crush isn't going anywhere. Tom was right back when he said that distance makes the heart fonder. When Asi returns, he'll be possibly different and so will she.

@ teenagedream91
She won't have an Australian accent? Oh my.
Hahaha It's normal for him but also normal for his parents to want him to protect his sisters and Leona, after all she's like family.

@ BlueDreams
No haha he is surrounded by girls and outnumbered too so he tends to go off and do his own thing unless his parents want him to stick around.
Yes they did have another kid. It's hard going through the process they went through so they thought adoption would be best. Raidon might play a big role in this. I'm not sure yet.
It does doesn't it? I just smile writing about an older Tom and Nai along with everyone else. Plus Loki is older and this is all so adorable. No your not imgaining. You have to be tough with your boys and Tom knows this. Asani is quite the rebels and has been in countless fights so he has grown to give his son tough love. Asani respects him a lot more now than when he first started becoming stern with him. He could have but seeing that Tom was working at home she didnt want to disturb him. I built Leona to be completely adorable haha

@ BlueDreams
Haha yeah except Leona won't have the accent. It will be cute though.

Oh my, Asi growing up around girls and being the oldest must not have been easy haha
Oh and Chris and Lu had another child! A boy apparently and he's adopted, which doesn't surprise me about Lu and Chris.
I can't help but kind of melt at imagining older Tom and Nai. It sounds so adorable and awww characters growing up.
Is it just me or has Tom become a bit more tough with Asi? Maybe for being the only boy?
Ahh and Shakespeare homework! Leona could have asked Tom as well but well asking Asi is much better.

@ teenagedream91
Oh that will be cool! Leona, the cool Australian girl eheh If Asi has TOm's temper, they'll have a bromance from early on xD

@ BlueDreams
Me too. I don't see TSwift being Lucy and Chris' kid. To me this Leona looks so sweet and innocent and possibly shy. I'll see what I can work with. Leona will have Chris' temper lol and Asani may possible has his mother's temper or personality or maybe Tom's personality maybe. Idk yet

@ teenagedream91
I prefer Leona as she is, honestly.

@ BlueDreams
Okay so I'm not going crazy lol when I saw him I'm like he kind of looks like Tom a bit. He's perfect! I found another one but he has a strong square jaw and that threw me off lol. It's funny how children would look like one parent and hen as they grow older they look like the other :)
Leona does have Chris hair lol I think it's adorable and she fit perfectly. My friend wanted me to use Taylor Swift or someone else as Leona but she's really...glitzy and the Leona I picture is a little less like that.

@ teenagedream91
The face structure plus eyes are very Tomish haha The twins are more Nai yes.
I think Leona has adorable Chris hair haha

@ BlueDreams
Haha he had two good looking parents and he's supposed to look more like Nai but I think he looks more like Tom in that picture. As for the twins they look like Nai I think. Leona was a little easy I wanted her to look a bit childish and have a round sweet face. A little fat in her cheeks ya know? Something different

@ teenagedream91
For Asi, I can believe and the twins as well. But damn.. he's fine xD

@ BlueDreams
Haha do you know how hard it was to find decent pictures to portray Leona and Asani? The twins were a lot harder though lol