The Science of Monsters - Comments

Yea! Finally another wonderful update :)

I really enjoyed this as I always do!

Seriously Jarvis I love the humour placed in this, this was the perfect time to have a few laughs after all the seriousness happened.

Green Brucey!
Hahaha this was Great!

Oh man! Stark lives once again of course ;)

@ Clara.
I still have that chapter. I didn't delete it fully, because I want to use some of it later.

@ Doc;
You didn't comment on the rewrite, so I hope you liked it better. I know I liked it better, and the ending leads into the beginning of the next chapter which is when I'm sure all of the wonderful Tony Fans will be jumping for joy.

I'm still slightly disappointed that you re wrote the chaotic but I enjoyed this version of it equally the same as the previous version of it.

Once more I enjoyed reading this as I always do:) I like the past that Scar has and it's sad but informing.

I enjoyed the interaction between the two and how Bruce hinestly has no idea why he survived. I like that you have him and Tony trying to find a cure for the Big Grewn monster:3

Awe noooooooooo Tony!!!! :(
This isn't cool man! He has to come back!

And at least Scarlotte knows the asses who killed Tony :( those SOB

@ Doc;
I did enjoy it :)

I dunno, I just felt meh about this chapter, like it didn't all make sense or seem natural Maybe it's just me, since Clara clearly enjoyed it Hope your vacation was good!

I'm sorry that you're not doing too good sweetie, I hope you feel better!

This chapter was really nice to read, it was fun seeing Bruce and Scars infraction with each other. They seem to being getting along pretty well, I love how good food brings even strangers together.

I think it was really brave for Scar to joke around about what had happened to her, I love that you have her accepting that the experiment she went through did happen. You also did great on showing that she really still has a issues with it because she wanted to drop it quickly as it was brought up. I I've her humour and how she wants her family recipe to be private, she's entertaining and fun to learn about each chapter.

Bruce seems to be connecting the missing spots in the plot about what kind of situation Tony is stuck in, and learning more about the horrible thin Lillian did to Scar and the other test subjects. I love that he was joining in on her humour and being so gentle with her, he clearly cares which is because of being a doctor. Oh he called her Betty, I love that you mentioned her most stories forget she's in the hulk movies and comics kudos to you!!!

Oh man I was waiting for the other guy to slip for a second there!!

As always I enjoyed reading this amazing story! This chapter was a good break from the drama but I'm ready for more chapters to come. Brilliant writing.

Hahha "because we're connected!"

Quite a few typos in this one, with missing words and adding extra letters. It really breaks up the flow of the chapter I also felt like a few things didn't make sense, like they needed an extra sentence or two for explanation, or just needed to be rewritten (such as Mike being determined to not let Bruce have a bit longer for lunch, but then suddenly letting him have the whole afternoon off??).

I think it was fine having Scarlett in third person - I felt like the focus was more on Bruce so it made sense. Should be interesting to see how Scarlett and Bruce interact in the next chapter, and hopefully Tony will show up soon too

I really enjoyed this chapter for many reasons.
Bruce was being so careful not to hulk out when dealing with the body, and he was being so gentle with her that it was almost romantic.

And the way you describe her condition is written so well that I can almost feel like I'm right there in the room with Bruce.

I'm excited to see just Bruce for awhile and sadden that Tony is going to be Mia for a few chapters:(

You really conveyed gentleness in this chapter, which was a nice change. Looking forward to this excitement Update soon!

I really love this story, you never stop surprising me with your writing and each chapter just seems to get better every time you update.

THANK GOD! Scar finally escaped, I would have to say I would have done the same thing because there would have been no way for me to be there. Not in the way everyone was being mistreated there.

Iron Man 3 scenes Gahhh! NOOO TONY! come back! I like that you used parts of the movie because it blend so well with the plot.

Sassy Jarvis is the best :)

Bruce saving people and the day :) I'm excited about seeing what happens next since all this happened :)

I'm super sorry for the lateness of this comment, I've been lazy not using my laptop.

As always I'm looking forward to the next update, and you're doing a great job :)

Only spotted a minor typo of missing one letter of a word, so no big deal. I felt like the scene with Tony really briefly grabbing coffee with Bruce was a tad pointless and boring in comparison to the rest of the action-filled chapter.

How did you manage to change the font halfway through? And at the end just two words are in the beginning's font too (I prefer the Times font, if that's any use )

Yay for more subscribers! And the regenerating limb is very cool.

Still keen to see where you take this, so hoping to see another update soon

I was pretty sure that my email messed up and sent me a repeat email and then I was super excited that there actually was two!!! Ah I was stoked!!! So the first one had me queasy but the second one.. Coulson!!! The dink! Hahaha and those pictures of Mark!! OMG IM KEEPING THOSE!!!

Yay for the two updates! The first one was so gruesome I was cringing at the descriptions... And I really wish that Bruce had accepted the mission, but maybe he will reconsider.

Spotted a few times when you'd say a character questioned/asked, but the sentence had a comma instead of a question mark, so that was a bit weird.

Can't wait for the three of them to be brought together, so update again soon!

Oh dear god no!!!!
No
No
No!!!!
Why? Why do you do this to me huh?
I feel so bad for Scar :(
How could someone do that to another person?!?
Oh right evil people!

I enjoyed this chapter and the way you have what happens to Scar in details makes me feel like I'm actually there and Scar.

Honestly I'm excited to see where this goes :3

First of all let me start by saying that the layout is awesome but I don't like the banner. It's too big.

As for the story itself, your detailed descriptions are nicely written without being boring and they add a nice feeling to the story. The imagery is amazing as well.

There were little typos (writing mistakes) but nothing too major. Keep it up.

The layout is working smoothly

A couple of minor errors to bring to your attention
Typo: "...and you’re new update is finally ready." - should be "your" because that sentence is currently saying "and you are new update is finally ready"
And also:"He takes a few more sips of coffee." - this sentence was randomly in the present tense instead of the past tense like everything else was.

Interesting update - I really have no idea what you're going to do with this story, so I'm really interested in reading more

I totally forgot that today was Tuesday! And then I got an email and saw what story was updated, I was just like OMG YAY! haha did a little dance while I went searching for my laptop. (which I found in a laundry basket. Like wth??)

Right so Tony, man you write him so well!! I've always had a hard time writing him but you nail it every time. I love it because I love Tony as he is, and it's hard to read him if he's too different from himself.

As for Bruce... Mhm I would LOVE to watch him work on some cars haha. And I can imagine the clothes he bought, lol button downs just seem so fitting for him. They give him that laid back professor look.

I'm going to guess that Nick Fury is the one who shows up, but only because when I read that last line, I could only seem to hear Fury saying that. haha. Who knows? I just can't wait to find out!!!

Fantastic update and I can't wait for the next one!!

Once again my friend you've proven to excite me with this story!
I love the details you placed in this chapter. I enjoy Stark being his sassy smart mouthed self :) Jarvis would never be donated and Tony has a love for Dummy that no one can truly understand. Horrible coffee leads to a bad start of the day, hopefully things won't get out of hand.

Bruce getting the ladies ;) Who wouldn't? He's an attractive man that turns into green giant on steroids once in awhile. Good for him getting a job and staying on the down low as much as possible. I love to see him working on a car, yummy!

Awe yes! He proved them wrong fixing up old Freddie :)
Oh now whose bothering him?!? Can't he get a damn break?
As always I love your ideas and style of writing this, it's like we the readers are watching our own personal marvel movie!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

I just came across this story and I can say I really like it so far. I cant wait to see how I all pans out. Please update soon :D

Ah! Once a week :( lol how can you not have a lot of attention for this? You have such a captivating writing style and a very keen eye for detail. It's amazing! Honestly one of the best Stark/Banner stories I've checked out so far. :D so pumped for the next update!!!