The Science of Monsters - Comments

So a few things I'd like to mention: firstly, the layout is cool and I adore the banner, but something is making it extremely laggy on my computer (perhaps the background image? I don't know). I hate reading it on the default layout, but it's the only way I can scroll at a reasonable pace In the second chapter you wrote in third person, but then you said he placed the coke in front of me, which should say Bruce or him or something like that. Such a minor mistake though. And so is the typo of "boarder" instead of "border". (I don't know if you want any feedback on errors at all - it's just something I tend to do, but I can stop if you'd like )

I'll be subscribing because I'm interested and have absolutely no idea what you're going to be doing with this, which is a good thing in my mind I recently started posting my Tony story, and it's gotten barely any attention, so I'm in the same boat as you At least you have two fans now

Look like I have to comment bomb this story already :)
I love Scarlett because she wasn't wanting the experiment, she was perfectly fine with her disability. A limp wasn't honestly a big deal, I mean you can tell it bothered her sometimes because she was being bullied by people about it. I like that about her and how she had her say in the experiment before she ended up agreeing which I felt was forced? She still could have said no. It's weird how it seems like her agreeing was planned for her to be experimented on by Killian(I don't like him still) and I hope things go decent for her because it just feels wrong that she agreed to this.

Bruce! Ah the poor guy still running away after thinking he had good friends, besides Tony. I know Bruce has problems and is always angry but he doesn't mean to actually hurt people either. I like how you showed he was scared of gettin caught and angry about getting nearly caught. He just wants a normal/semi normal decent life without the running. I want to give him this big hug and tell him everything will work out. Maybe things will?

Hahaha Stark humour really did help out in this chapter, I can't wait to see what Tony will be doing in this story.

I love this story and I see a lot of potinentual in it:)
The writing is great and the plot is exciting:) Im excited to see what the story will bring next.