Faithless - Comments

Hey, sorry I haven't been here in awhile. I read a few chapters but didn't get around to commenting so here I am now.

Oh damn, Ash actually cleaned his place up. Good for him. Oh that nurse again, can I please beat her up lol. Oh damn, she's the mother of the guy they put in jail, well no wonder she's been such a bitch. He deserved to go to jail you stupid bitch, you're delusional! So Jake told his mom huh? I'm glad that she seems understanding about it is willing to get to know Ash, they seem to be doing well so far. Yeah, I don't think fucking in the hay would be very comfortable lol. I love how he just imagined them doing that though lol. Aww, what happened? They were kissing and then BAM! Drama. They did move a little fast though, I think they both need a moment to assess the relationship and make sure that they are both ready for it.

Oh my god! Ash actually denied alcohol and sex with a guy? Damn, he really has changed. I know it must have been hard for him though so kudos to him. Seriously guys? Like really? Grow the fuck up, I mean seriously. Talking and gossiping about Ash and Jake behind their backs is just fucked up dude. That goes to show who your real friends are Ash. Oh and here goes the Captain, trying to mess up with their relationship. Just let them be together for Pete's sake, as long as it doesn't affect their work then there's nothing wrong with it! Just grr...people lol.

Oh shit, he's going to see his mother. The woman who turned him into a complete dick. You go and give her a piece of your damn mind Ash, I'm right here with you. She is such a bitch, gahh I hate her. She basically neglected her own child, how can you do something like that?! I want to know the real reason why Ash's father left and why he didn't take Ash with him because he really should have. That woman is bat shit crazy, I feel bad for you Ash. He has two stepbrothers and a stepmother? That's cool. I think he should try and find his father and find out the truth of what happened. Uh oh, I wonder why Jake is in such a bad mood. OH shit!! That is so fucking hot!! Like oh my god! Now I'm all excited. Naughty naughty Ash, it sure did make help his mood though ;) haha. A good blowjob could cure any man's mood hehehehe :D I love how he just told the nurse the truth and she wasn't even super pissed about it haha.

Anyways, great chapters, not that I was expecting anything less lol. Have you started reading Seize the Day yet? I'm slowly working on an update for it so it should be up in the next couple of days, it won't be anything special though.

Aww I loved this. I'm glad that Ash and Jake talked and straightened things out. Thank god the whole thing with Brooke was a big misundersting. They are finally dating for real! Yay! Mm Jake, Ash and I are holding you up to fucking him into the mattress. I love the color of Jake's eyes they are so beautiful. Damn, a ten inch penis, can I get some of that please? Lol! Oh no, here go the guys talking shit. I mean seriously? He is fucking injured, show some fucking sympathy! Come on As say something, he's your boyfriend now! I was so scared he wasn't going to say anything and then I would've been pissed. I'm glad he did, I'm proud of you Ash, kuddos to you. That's right! You all better show him some respect! The guys obviously respect Ash a lot if they did that. He shouleld have definitely kissed him goodbye but its ok. Jake will teach him the ways if a relationship. Anyways, great job. I loved this chapter <3

Another great chapter. Oh shit, Jake is dating Brooke? I thought he didn't have a girlfriend. *Is confused now* Poor Ash, it's not Jake's fault though, well he didn't cheat on you at least I know. Hopefully they will get to talk and straighten things out. I hope that the whole Brooke thing is one big misunderstanding because Ash and Jake are meant to be together. I'm glad that the guys who shot Jake are finally in custody and hopefully the'll be able to get some answers as to why they're after them. I need to go write my update for Seize the Day so I guess I should get off here and try to write it. Well, after I figure out a name for my girl in this other co-write I'm doing lol.

That's cool. Bleck, scrubbing floors, no thank you! Lol. Yep I got it all done. I only had to clean my room, the bathroom, vacuum downstairs, and clean the kitchen.

Oh it's no problem. I just got done reading another chapter and I have a feeling a lot of drama is coming.

@ Mrs. Shadows
I really only had the bathroom and vacuuming to do. I keep up with the dishes and laundry. I suppose i could have dusted and scrubbed the floors... *shrug* but I didn't. Hope you got your cleaning done too. =)
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Now for your comment on the story: Thank you. I like Jake's mommy. She's so sweet.

Aww, I'm glad Jake is ok but that injury must hurt like hell. He is a very lucky man. That stupid bitch, let Ash in now or I'll come in there myself and kick your ass. So, he gets to meet Jake's mom, she seems cool. Oh shit, how did she know? Lol. She is very good at reading people obviously. Aww, Ash is in love with Jake...too cute!!! Yay!!! I'm so happy. It sucks that Jake can't understand him though :( Really, you're not going to allow them to be together or you'll fire them, that's just uncool. I'm really starting to not like the captain...grr!!! lol. That nurse again. Let me at her!!! Great chapter. Off to read more.

@ AJM1
Hahahaha, I would like to see the day when they come out with that. Yeah, I wouldn't have cleaned but today is cleaning day and she is all up my ass about it. Lol, I could totally see you scrambling around trying to clean everything. Did you get it all done on time? Lol.

@ Mrs. Shadows
I'll clean when Sears comes out with a riding vacuum cleaner. LOL I wasn't going to clean today, then I get a call that my bro and his wife are coming. You shoulda seen me scramble! I had all of a half hour.

@ AJM1
Its no problem :D if I really like the story and have a lot to say then my comments tend to ne prettt long and since you're chapters are long and a lot of stuff hpappens my comments tend to ne longer. Plus yourw a great writer so you deserve it. I like that too, it oddly turns me on even more when one is inexperienced. I sadly have to clean and then ill read some more and then try to write.

@ AJM1
Haha, our minds think alike ;)

@ Mrs. Shadows
Wow, just wow. that's the longest comment i've ever received. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I'm happy you're enjoying the story. :) I like to write Jake as a naive person when it comes to the same sex. IDK why that seems to get me, but it did in this story. Especially with Ash having so much experience. He's having to teach the rookie everything.

@ Mrs. Shadows
I read your comment about Shadz and thought "I think you're me'!!!

Ok, so I'm finally here to comment. I read like 5 chapters so I'm on chapter ten now. Anyways, it was so good that I couldn't even stop to comment until now, I just want to read read read. Don't give up Jake, I know Ash is a pain in the ass but you can do it!! I don't blame him for wanting to give up. I'm not a very patient person so I probably would have given way before he did lol. Damn, isolating himself in his room, that's not healthy. I can understand him being pissed though, that must have hurt his ego quite a lot. I thought it was nice of Jake to ask one of his friends to deliver the groceries so he could at least talk to someone and the email as well. Jake is such a sweetie, he reminds me of me because when I'm out in public around people I'm exactly like him, mostly. I'm sweet, and shy and tend to let people push me around sometimes but it's true, he's going to need to toughen up some if he wants to be a good cop. I'm proud of Jake for standing his ground and saying no when Ash tries to seduce him. He knows what he wants and that's a real relationship, not just sex so kudos to him.

Of course Ash's desperate ass has to fuck the lawn mower guy, and then Jake walking in...awkward! lol.

Aww, deep down Ash really does want to be close to someone. He wants actual friends, and he so likes Jake hehehehehehehehe he just needs to admit it.

Oh shit! Is it finally time! Come on, I need some boy on boy action. Aww, I like how they took things slow, let Jake explore him and make sure that this is what he really wants. Come on Jake, go further, touch his cock, you know you want to!! Take that big juicy cock into your mouth and suck on it! You're not attracted to women Jake, it's a man you want. To feel those hard muscles underneath your fingertips, a hard cock going in and out of your tight little asshole, that's what you really want Jake. Lol, I love how Jake just went beserk on him, so hot.

Aww no! FUCK ME IS RIGHT! NO CONDOM? COME ON NOW!!! GRRRR, DAMMIT!! I hate you for getting my hopes up like that and now I've got a lady boner here, thanks a lot lol. Fine, be that way and make me wait...grrr!!

I wonder if Ash will actually tell the guys about him and Jake...hmmm!

Oh no, an arguement :( I don't blame Jake for being unsure because he isn't exactly trustworthy just because he has changed some. It takes time to trust someone after all the things he's done but I know how Ash feels too, hurt that someone you care about doesn't trust you.

Holy fuck! Noooo Jake got shot! You better not die Jake or else I will kick your ass along with Ash. Stay strong! I really hope he is ok but I'm sure he will be. I can't believe Jackson was in on it the whole time, just damn but he got what he deserved, dumbass.

I agree, with Ash, he needs to do something because obviously him sitting around and doing nothing isn't helping because he and Jake almost got killed. Grr, let me at that captain, I'll talk some sense into him...with my fists

Aww, Ash stood up for him that is so damn sweet and that made me smile. Ash cares about Jake, actually cares it's so cute! Great, I bet he just loves the idea of being cooped in a hotel room where he could easily get killed this time just smh. He should have went to the hospital with Jake.

Overall, really great, I loved it! Now, off to read more!!!

@ AJM1
Fuck it, I'm too fucking tired lol ill do it in the morning. YES IF SOMEONE ASKED ME WHAT THE DEFINITION OF PERFECT IS I WOULD SAY, "M MOTHERFUCKING SHADOWS" haha. Yes the dimples make him look so damn cute! I have dimples but they look terrible on me compared to him lol. Oh yes his voice sends chills down my spine and makes my heart squeeze its so amazing. I could listen to it forever and be happy. That's cool, I just saw them for my first time this year at Locura Festival. Best night of my fucking life. I never wanted it to end. I became a fan back in 2010. I hate that I didn't know about them until then. I wish I could've been a fan earlier but oh well. I hope to see them more in the future because they are amazing live and I love them so much. Oh god! Don't get me started on that horsecock! I could go on for hoyrs about what I would do to that horsecock haha. I know right! If they were nudes I would be like, "Fuck porn" I am so serious and just get myself off to his naked pictures like the perv I am. Well then we will be very good friends :D I live people with dirty minds haha. Mm I like me explicit sex scenes. I will have to check out all your stuff then lol ;) ok I'm seriously off to bed now.

@ Mrs. Shadows
No pressure to post comments. I know how it can be when you're in a story.
Matt is perfect. Those dimples get me each time. And his voice.... heavenly. I got to see them 2 years ago and I wished the concert never ended. He has such stage presence. They all do. And let's not forget his horsec*ck. hahaha OH those pics on the internet, why can't they be nude ones? I'd be salivating.
Oh and I'm a pervert too. All my stories are NC17. pretty graphic in some of them.

@ AJM1
Yay! I'm glad I could make you grin, it is all true though. I loves your writing. Well, I'm just saying it was so hot. I swear, I was reading it and right when it got there it got several degrees hotter in the room and gossebumps appeared on my skin and I was getting all excited. I was thinking, "Fuck, fuck, fuck" lol. I have a dirty mind if you couldn't already tell lol and I'm damn proud of it. I need to post more comments. I've read several chapters but just couldn't stop reading lol. I'm about to now though. Again, it was not a problem, I really lile your work and hope to read more from you. Oh my god! I know right! That's my favorite pic of him. He is so cute but sexy and that smile turns me to putty everytime. He is fucking perfect, oh the things I would do to him lol.

@ Mrs. Shadows
Thank you!!! You just made me grin! I love your review and I'm happy you enjoyed the first few chapters. I'm totally in awe of your second review. Makes me want to go read that chp all over again! LOL Yeah, you'll have to wait for them to get it on, but I hope you'll find it worth it. HUGS! Thanks so much again for reading me. xx ps, Matt is hot in your pic

posted 2ce/ removed

OH LORDY GEE! Now I've got goosebumps and am a little moist between the legs. Fuck, that was hot. That dirty talk, HOLY FUCK! Damn, I wanted it to happen so bad, DAMN LOL. I know, I have to wait though but damn that chapter had me going. Yay! Go Jake! You actually tricked Ash, damn! I see potential in him, just give it a little more time. Ohhhhh Ash kissed him and Jake liked it. You are so attracted to him Jake, just admit it. God, I loved this chapter so much! Whew, now if you'll excuse me, I must go take care of myself.

Hey! So I read the first three chapters and OH MY GOD THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!! I'm already fucking hooked. Your descriptions of everything are absolutely amazing and a few of the words you used like "fucknuts" made me laugh. Ash is such an ass but a hot piece of ass I bet. It's not his fault though, I swear parents just irk me sometimes and me being one myself and noticing how bad examples some parents can be pisses me off. Poor Jake, I feel bad for the poor guy, getting pranked like that and everyone hating him. It kind of annoys me how he is so calm and nice and good all the time for some reason. I'm just like, "How the fuck does he do it?" lol. I hope Ash can loosen him up a bit because he is definitely way too soft and I hope Jake can change Ash's way of thinking as well so he isn't such an ass.

Poor Ash for getting shot, despite not liking him it's sweet that he took the bullet for him even if he was just doing his job. I know he can be a good guy, Jake just needs to bring it out of him and I think he will. I have faith in him even though it won't be easy. Ooo damn, Ash suspended that must hurt his ego quite a lot and now he and Jake have to be cooped up together for who knows how long. I think it'll do them good, give them a chance to bond and then maybe by the time they are able to leave they will both be different people. Sorry, this comment is all out of order but whatevs lol.

Anyways, I love this story and I'm going back to read now since I have some free time. Keep up the great work!