This story.. this was simply stunning. I haven't read a fanfic so vivid with original character traits like this before. I actually had to take a few minutes to myself to just soak the whole thing in. Beautifully written. Although I'm not generally a fan of fanfic pieces, this on it's own is one of the best I've read. Looking forward to more of your writing!
v we all pride ourselves on our perfect perfection. despite me never writing in caps unless it's a story. lel. of course. i've literally never listened to atl in my life though i should i know but i really enjoyed this.
@ the speed of sound Thank you so much! I pride myself on having minimal grammatical and spelling errors, and I don't think there are any in this particular story.
This comment has left me speechless; just, thank you.
you certainly deserve this comment you won from me in the 'are we alike' thread.
this is amazing. it's detailed without being overworked, with a fine dusting of intelligent word choice. call me unobservant but i didn't catch a single grammatical error in the entire chapter. i could envision the events unfolding delicately, as though they formed a video, and despite my lack of knowledge about the band themselves, or their music, i found myself there with the men, experiencing what they did.
i loved this. sweet, confused and willing to sacrifice anything for what matters most.
omg thank you so much.
But please don't go and pilgrimage my works. Bad idea, right there.