Whatever It Takes I'll Do - Comments

  • CountryGirl712

    CountryGirl712 (100)

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    This has a lot of promise, but it's a bit confusing. I feel like it switches setting quickly, leaving the reader disorientated. Also too many characters are introduced at once. On the good side... The layout is good, so is the description and the storytelling. I want to know what happens next! Good job and keep writing.
    September 16th, 2013 at 12:31am