In the Midnight Hour... - Comments

Aww :)

@ RebelBullet
Hmmm it's strange to me how they say it's confusing. It all seemed simple enough to grasp to me. In some stories people write I get confused because of the way they word things or if they just randomly switch scenes without gradually building up to the next one. You didn't do any of that but I am glad that I made you feel better about it.

@ RebelBullet
Hmmm it's strange to me how they say it's confusing. It all seemed simple enough to grasp to me. In some stories people write I get confused because of the way they word things or if they just randomly switch scenes without gradually building up to the next one. You didn't do any of that but I am glad that I made you feel better about it.

@ xMandiblesx
Thanks so much! You really didn't have to read this, but I'm so happy you did anyway :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it, I had this in my head over a period of time. I was so depressed at the time I wrote it, though, I just needed to do something the meant anything. This is the first written work I've done in less than three hours and adored.

I try not to make my writing too complicated, but the people I'm around don't seem to get it. My writing style, I mean. They say it doesn't make sense. I have no idea how I can dumb it down, though. It would sound stupid to me if I used the most basic of everything grammatically correct. So, I appreciate you being able to understand my apparently confusing writing that I've never had a problem with until classmates and my mother started pointing it out :)

I read it and liked it! I don't normally read slash but I also have nothing against it. I like the fact that it had one main line it kept going back to. "Last night..." Yeah, I liked that. Overall this was pretty interesting! I didn't get bored at all and I like your writing style. Very easy to understand and the words flow.

@ Livvi Horror
KITTYFACE :D
Thanks :3 I needed to come up with an alias for him since I didn't have a name yet. I thought Hummingbird would work for his personality that you don't really get to see. I have some of the two shot I've promised that rad bitch below you so, I hope I'll have more of it done before Monday if only to keep me sane.

Aw this is so sweet =^-^=
I would love to see more of this, and the name Hummingbird is amazing

I already told you my thoughts on this ^^

And I request it to be a two shot c: