March 26th, 2014 at 06:23am
Why Do I Love You? Contest
I finally read your story wherein the girl was at fault here! I’m glad to have seen the two sides of the coin. You did actually well on both sides. Bravo.
I would have liked to know more about what happened, though. There was little for me to go through but I guess that’s what relationships are like. It’s deep when it comes to falling in love but sudden when it comes to break-ups. I felt really sorry for the guy.
The first few paragraphs were not as enticing as I wanted them to be. It felt like an ordinary break-up which can sometimes be a little uninteresting to read since there are so many prospects that go through the same situations.
But it was the last few lines that stuck me the most. Yes, the last few lines that truly made my heart melt for the guy. The girl was actually a pain but it was his point of view that surely brought me down.
I didn’t know what the image in the layout meant but soon after I read the story, I understood it perfectly. Just like the users below me, I loved how you interpreted the image and how you were able to deliver it.
But a very beautiful story overall.