You're still doing incredibly well! There hasn't been a chapter that I didn't like. Your descriptions are absolutely perfect, especially when you focus on his struggles. I feel like that brings it all to life :)
I'm really enjoying this story. I don't know why you aren't getting many more comments. Please don't be discouraged! You write really well, and the storyline is captivating. I like your pacing, descriptions, characters, dialogue... everything, really. :) This could be a classic in the making, so please keep going! :)