Drowning in Our Own Debris - Comments

Hoping you’ll finish this great story one day!! It’s so good

I'm really enjoying the second installment with all these characters, having watched Addie grow and Brian and Rachel's relationship evOPlve over he years. You keep it real.

I am literally falling in love with all of your stories! Seriously, please update this if you can, hell update all of your stories because they are all incredible and you're such an amazing writer!!

Max seems like a good guy, I just hope he follows through on all of his promises. It was really sweet how star struck he was, bless him.

I think it was very brave of Brian to tell Addie about the pills and what he and Rachel went through, he could have just brushed it under the carpet and made it out to be nothing but he didn't. I'm glad he told her, that way, they can be evern closer as a family without any secrets getting in the way.

I adore Brian and Rachel as a couple, I ship them so hard!

As to Luna, it could be what's been bothering her, only time will tell. I know people know from a young age what they like and don't like, maybe she's feeling confused. I hope it's nothing bad.

Sorry it took me so long to read and comment!

Great update!!! I loved this entire story so far!! Again waaaaay too much smirking anyways can't wait for this to be updated!! Oh btw, I swear Bri's pervertedness sounds a lot like my ex. Exactly like him lmao!!!

So very glad to see this update!!! I hope Max is being honest and doesn't break Addie's heart. I think Brian did the right thing by telling Addie about his addiction to the pills. Luna is only 8 but sometimes a person can tell at that age and even younger if they are a lesbian. Just have to wait and see. Can't wait for another update!!

So very glad to see this update!!! I hope Max is being honest and doesn't break Addie's heart. I think Brian did the right thing by telling Addie about his addiction to the pills. Luna is only 8 but sometimes a person can tell at that age and even younger if they are a lesbian. Just have to wait and see. Can't wait for another update!!

I loved this update :D I agree with Brian telling her about the addiction :) and he told her in a very nice way but telling her the truth non the less. I think Max is genuine but we have only seen him this time, so I could be wrong. Luna is hard to tell, almost every girl at that age hate boys and their cooties lol so she might outgrow that or she might be a lesbian.

Yay!! I was so excited when I saw an update on this story! I loved this chapter and as always I love the relationship that Brian has with his wife and children.

why u so perfect *.* ahaha I love this story and I missed it terribly!! great great update! I hope Max is as good as he seems to be! it's kinda cute when brian gets all sentimental with Addie! adorable dad brian is adorable :3

@ HanerJoy
I totally looked up the interview that you were talking about where his wife was trying to lure him off the phone after I read your comment LOL! I was thinking the same thing though when I wrote the part where he said "chill out, Dude", I was hearing it how he said it during that interview LOL! Thanks for reading and leaving a comment!

@ fantasygirltexas
Glad you enjoyed the bit about the boys going onstage! I think you might be right in some ways about Luna, but only time will tell! Thanks for reading and leaving feedback!

@ heretic.
I don't think I could really stay mad at him either for that LOL. Glad you enjoyed it!

I don't have a lot of banter between the guys in most of my stories so I saw that as a prime opportunity to put some in! I'm glad you enjoyed that part as well, it was really fun to write!

We'll find out in the future what's been bothering little Luna, but you may be partially right. We'll see how things go now that she's the oldest in the house! Maybe she'll come out of her shell a bit!

Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts! I'm really glad you're enjoying this story!

Naughty Brian That was so hot, though. I wouldn't be able to stay mad at him, either. Hahaha.

I loved it when the boys ran out on stage, they're so adorable but that whole exchange between Brian and Zack had me laughing so much! "And Brian has like 15 kids"

Awww, Brian got teary! Bless him. I think Addie wil be jut fine, by herself. I think Luna might have been feeling a little - not pushed out - but maybe a little out of the group? What with Addie being pregnant, the whole TJ ordeal then going off to college, Brian and Rachel's focus was mainly on her. So maybe now that Addie has left home, Luna will start to feel more like herself. I still think her being adopted is playing a big part in what's been bothering her, though. And, maybe now that Addie has left, she's scared to play the big sister role to the little guys? Just a thought.

I love this story so much, it's one of my favourites, I do a happy dance whenever it gets updated! XD Can't wait for more! :D

I think Luna has middle child syndrome. She feels ignored and forgotten sometimes and she needs extra attention. Great update! The boys going on stage was priceless!!!

omg when he said "thank you baby" it reminded me of the radio interview he did that he was on the phone and his wife was butt nake in front of him and he said "thank you baby" to her. And when he said "chill out dude" it reminded me of the Q & A when he was talking about the names dragon ball z and sonic the hedge hog. I literally heard him saying it when I read it lol I loved the chapter :D I think Luna might be sad about Addie leaving for college and not living with her anymore. And the fact that she knows she's adopted could add to it.

@ Parawhorree!x
I think Luna is at the age where she's starting to figure out her identity and who she really is. We'll find out more about what's eating her as the story continues Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

@ HanerJoy
Luna finding out she is adopted may contribute to her acting off, but there may be more to the story though too. Poor Rachel, when it comes to Brian and her mom she's always stuck in the middle of it. I don't think those two will every truly get along Glad you liked Bora Bora! Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts! More sexy time to come in the chapter I'm about to post!

@ fantasygirltexas
I agree, Judy and Brian probably will always be at each other's throats. I'm sure there will continue to be quite the impressive words exchanged between them in the future. Maybe Rachel can figure out how to straighten them out one way or another! Happy that you enjoyed the vacation! Thanks for reading and letting me know what you thought!

@ rachthebat.
I think the adoption is playing a part in Luna's behavior, but I think there may be something else that's bothering her too

I'm glad Bora Bora was good for you as it was for me We'll see a bit of Brian's sensitive side in this next chapter but we'll also get to see quite the cocky side of him too!

Hmmm...... I could think of some creative punishments for Brian when he starts shooting his mouth off to Rachel's mom Even if she does usually deserve to be irritated by him.

Thanks again for all of your wonderful feedback!

@ synystergirl
Glad you enjoyed it! I kind of got stuck on this one for a bit but the inspiration is starting to come back around! We'll find out what all is bothering Luna as time goes on, there's more that's playing into it than what it appears. Thanks so much for sticking with the story and continuing to read and comment!

Ohhhhh thanks for the update - hoping to see more very soon. I hope Luna is going to be ok - seems she is not headed in a good direction. Great chapter!!!

I think the whole adoption thing might be finally catching up with Luna, maybe she's been thinking about her real parents. Maybe she might even want to meet her real mom but is worried about what Brian and Rachel might think. Or it may be something completely different, haha.

Oh, Bora Bora did NOT disappoint. Phew! That was really hot, but also really romantic, too. That they were reconnecting after having so much drama surround them. And Brian was sweet..for all of five seconds but I love him for it!

While I think Brian could have held back with Rachel's mum and kept his mouth shut, her commenting that Rachel looked terrible, wasn't very nice. She probably could have chosen her words more carefully. I'm sure Rachel could think up a suitable punishment for Brian hahaha.

Definitely worth the long wait! :D

Luna's behavior worries me very much. I think Rachel's mom and Brian will always be at each other's throats and that can be very overwhelming for Rachel. The vacation was perfect and I'm glad they got to get away together and reconnect.

I think Luna's behavior is about her being adopted. And if I was Rachel I wouldn't be mad at Brian because Judy started it. Even if they were in vacations, they are bound to be tired. And the time in Bora Bora was amazing, and hot :P

Aww whats up with little luna?