Falling to Pieces - Comments

  • @ lovelyhope
    that's the ultimate dream! haha
    thank you for reading :))
    September 9th, 2014 at 11:30pm
  • If Harry Styles got me a trip to Paris for my birthday I would freak out haha. This was so cute though. It's so easy to see that he really cares for Letty and is protective over her. I just want him to care for her in a more than best friends forever sort of way.
    September 9th, 2014 at 08:23pm
  • @ lovelyhope
    thank you! I wanted the background to kind of fit her- delicate, girly, soft, etc. So I'm glad you like it! And the chair! I was just in hobby lobby on Saturday and I saw one very similar too! It's the one piece in her house that's bright and loud, while the rest of it is very light/pastel and that's an important contrast that's reflected in the rest of the story! Her name wasn't mentioned yet, but it's Nicolette, or Letty for short.

    Thanks so much for your comment! I'm glad you're excited because I'm really excited to write it! :)
    June 9th, 2014 at 09:26pm
  • I love everything about this so far:

    First, the background is gorgeous. A bit of a weird juxtaposition with Harry, flowers, and lace, but it works haha.

    Second, I friggen love that chair. I saw it (or at least a similar version) in Hobby Lobby and I told my roommate I needed it. It matches absolutely nothing and is so bright and obnoxious - how could you not love it?

    Finally, I love how the chair plays such an important part in the girl's (we didn't find out her name yet, did we? Or maybe I just missed it haha) life. I love that she can pinpoint some of her biggest moments back to being in the chair.

    So excited for this story!
    June 9th, 2014 at 07:29pm
  • @ xstoriesyettounfoldx

    thank youuu and thank you for being the very first to give any feedback! The chair, man. It's so tacky and obnoxious I WANT IT
    May 14th, 2014 at 06:07am
  • Oh man. This sounds angsty and wonderful and I am very excited to see where you take it. That damn chair. That's incredible.
    May 14th, 2014 at 06:01am