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  • ShotToRemember

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    orgasm three! I need it! oh my god that was so hot! I love how drawn out it was and how beautiful they both are:) and yeah boy and doll face yayy!! <3
    January 11th, 2014 at 07:02am
  • LoveForGiraffes

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    I am so sorry it's taken me forever to read and comment on this. Thank you so much for entering my contest you did am amazing job. It's been YEARS since I read a good MCR fan fic, so thank you for writing such a good one. It was hot, steamy, and perfect. Great job dear =]
    December 26th, 2013 at 08:27pm
  • Madzikinz

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    This is great :) I can't wait to read the next part Very Happy
    December 7th, 2013 at 05:06am
  • lilemchan

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    Aaaahhhhh so amazing Happy face:

    I love this fic, I love the way you write and ashdja..!!

    Sorry I'm just totally fangirling over you. Keep up the good work!<3
    November 28th, 2013 at 10:25pm
  • Im2Human4Nature

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    Awesome, I would love to read it
    November 28th, 2013 at 08:10am
  • You'reJustASadSong

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    Holy motherf-

    That was marvellous. I'll never get tired of reading your smut. Never.

    I can't freaking wait to read the next part oh my god, no matter how long you take, I am 120% sure that It'll be worth the wait. =D
    November 27th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • lizzicleromance

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    @ Beavis.
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, thank you SO MUCH for your comment!!! It made me giggle so hard, I needed that. I'm so glad you liked it- SO GLAD!!! Best of luck to you on your exams and finals and tests, you'll do GREAT!!! I'm nearly finished with writing the grand finale to their awesome night, I figured since that may take awhile and what I submitted yesterday was nearly 9,000 words, you guys waited long enough for the update so I submitted it for you. :'D
    November 27th, 2013 at 05:02pm
  • Beavis.

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    Jesus. I wrote a fucking monolouge.
    November 27th, 2013 at 04:12pm
  • Beavis.

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    I WANNA FUCKING READ IT. Dude, for starters, I have no idea why I didn't comment when I first read this because holy shit in a cheese stick, this is amazing. It's perfect, and I shit you not, in anatomy we're doing the skeletal system (pray for me, I'm going to shoot myself in the fucking FACE THERE IS SO MUCH TO RETAIN.) And I was studying last night (cramming because I don't know what a fucking priority is, Jesus Hails, get your shit together), and lo and behold, clavicle came up, and I thought of this story and how amazing it was and how I wished you would update AND THEN YOU FUCKING DID. LIKE HOLY FUCK IS THAT NOT MAGIC OR WHAT? I'm actually in anatomy right now and we're labeling the skull (I'm gonna beat mine against this desk, shit is redic. fucking zygomatic process and shit. Who the fuck decided one bone needed the word process in it, I mean come on. Fuckin. Mandible. FuCkin. Occipital. Occipital this DICK jesus.) So yes, I must say chao but you're fucking perfect and never stop writing you're fabulous happy hanukkah, I'm jewish (I'm not jewish, I'm black. Ive met black jews before though. I love jews. Jews.) alright byebye beautiful thank you for updating you're great marry me.

    Much love, and no drugs.
    Halalalalalalaaaaa hailey.
    November 27th, 2013 at 04:12pm
  • Lyra

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    Dude....words can't even....please post the next part as soon as you can! This was amazing!
    November 27th, 2013 at 12:39pm
  • lizzicleromance

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    @ fun ghoul fez.
    OH GOSH. YES. THANK YOU!!!!!!!! I was so unbelievably excited once I saw you had read and commented, you have no idea!! Thank you for every word. <3 You have always been such a big inspiration and I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

    Also, Alkaline Trio is the PERFECT band for you. Their lyrics are dark and twisted and gorgeous, several songs remind me of something you would write! "Private Eye" and "This Could Be Love" in particular, "Damnesia" is suuuuch a sexy album with all of their best lyrics. Their music is so powerful and super inspirational when it comes to writing! Def def def give them a listen whenever you can, please!

    Thank you so much, again. You really truly did just make my less than great day so much better. <3
    October 5th, 2013 at 04:06am
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    Oh my gosh Lizzy. My reaction to this can best be described in one word sentences. Here we go:
    Fluff! :D Sex! :D drugs! :D Gerard calling frank pet names! :D Mikey cursing like a fucking sailor!! Clavicles!!
    I know those last few were more than one woes but my lord, you hit everything on the head here. This chapter oozed sexiness right from the get go and although I've never heard that song by Alkaline Trio, I will be listening to that song ASAP. Basically this proved that you are the queen of sexy Frerard fluff and I cannot wait to see how this goes next!

    PS: I love how you wrote Mikey and Frank's friendship. Completely perfect.
    PPS: I love you, don't ever stop writing <3
    October 5th, 2013 at 02:18am
  • Lyra

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    I don't generally read Frerard but a really well written story with a good plot and good character development is a story worth reading whether it's Frerard or not. I have to say you hit all those spots and I'm really excited to read the next part. You're very talented!
    October 2nd, 2013 at 01:12pm
  • Vespa

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    I am in love with this story! It kind of makes me think of The Great Gatsby and I like that. I've actually never read a frerard that was so discrptive and sexy I absolutely am in love! I can wait for more and good luck in the contest!
    October 2nd, 2013 at 05:20am
  • You'reJustASadSong

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    Oh my god, first of all, wow. That was fucking amazing.

    I love this! It's brilliantly written - as usual - and I couldn't help but fall in love with Gerard's character a little bit. =')

    Frank is a little sweetheart too, he's kind of amateur at the casual smut and I find that absolutely adorable.

    So yeah, I cannot wait until the next chapter is up. I'm so looking forward to it, man, you write good smut. Not that that's anything new to me, you're like a freaking god ='D

    Anywho, I really enjoyed this, good luck with the contest and keep writing because you're a fucking pro.
    October 2nd, 2013 at 12:28am