January 4th, 2016 at 06:26pm
I Had My Heart Set on You - Comments
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Totally loving this and hope you'll be updating again soon xxxJanuary 4th, 2016 at 09:11am
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Some things I'm sure you're wondering "why in God's name are you giving us this kind of memory?"...you see....Mia had to move on- she didn't have a choice she had two little ones to go on for, but Zack? Zack had only himself to worry about, so he couldn't move on.
This. So much. Needed to be explained so people didn't bitch about it.
I had a blonde moment when I came on and opened chapter five, though. =P It was all, "Wait. This isn't the chapter she sent yesterday... But I've read it already. Did Mibba delete her update!?"
And then my brain caught up and I realised what was going on. =P
I loved both of these, of course. It made me like Chance a little bit more, and the Zacky chapter... That one broke my heart. But it was necessary.
I love this so much. <3January 4th, 2016 at 07:42am -
aww I loved this chapter....and im glad to hear your mom is cancer free! and Im sorry to hear about your family friends involved in a crash.... I cant imagine..,,,,but I am super excited your writing again because I love this story so much!!!May 18th, 2015 at 02:35am
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So, xxGee basically said everything. ;) And you already know I ADORE this chapter. But I couldn't not comment.
I am IN LOVE with that nursery. It's just so...ugh. So beautiful. The colours, the lighting, the softness... *sigh*
Gorgeous.May 10th, 2015 at 11:29pm -
I nearly cried at the end. The birth of the babies was such a beautiful thing and then the end scene made me cry. She could have had Zack like 13 years sooner. She TRIED to have him sooner, and everyone kept getting in the way. It's frustrating. :(May 10th, 2015 at 05:40pm
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I nearly cried at the end. The birth of the babies was such a beautiful thing and then the end scene made me cry. She could have had Zack like 13 years sooner. She TRIED to have him sooner, and everyone kept getting in the way. It's frustrating. :(May 10th, 2015 at 05:40pm
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I can't believe it took me a whole semester to get back on Mibba. Pleasant surprise when I went to check my subscriptions! I'm so glad this story has started. This chapter had me getting os emotional! I feel Mia's pain coming through the words. My heart and tummy are fluttering! I can't wait for more.December 11th, 2014 at 06:56am
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@ xxGee
AW. You're so sweet! I'm so glad you liked it!
It was definitely a challenging one to write.October 17th, 2014 at 05:02am -
That was an incredible chapter. Wow. Just wow. Honestly it wasn't cliche or unrealistic or even offending in any way. You made it real and hard hitting and emotional and it fucking killed to read it. That's a good thing. Bravo.October 17th, 2014 at 05:01am
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@ Haylie Jaed
Send your boss my apologies!
That's the reason I decided to show both sides! It seemed like such an injustice to one of them to just tell one side. I was the envy of the 4th grade after the concert, like I said- those were the days
@ Anishinoda1986
Aw, thank you! You'll see it sometime next week!
@ ForeverRocking660
Thank you!
@ AJ9
Thank you! Next week, hopefully the same time (maybe earlier) the next chapter has been a lot of fun to write, so it may be sooner!
@ AshleyDel28
Thank you so much!
@ powerofkisses
I was so madly in love with Drew Lachey! I was front row for that show, so at eight, it was the greatest day of my life Thanks for the comment!
@ NikkiFoxy8
The good ole' days! Thanks for the comment!October 16th, 2014 at 04:18am -
I remember 98 degrees! Those really were the days! I really love this story so far! Please update soon!October 16th, 2014 at 02:41am
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I love and miss 98 degrees. I always thought they were amazing!October 16th, 2014 at 02:30am
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Wow...that was heartbreaking. It was hard to read but I'm glad you delved into that situation and gave us a look into Zack's mind at the time. Amazing chapter!!October 16th, 2014 at 01:06am
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So sad
I'm looking forward to the next chapter so please update again soon. xxxOctober 16th, 2014 at 12:13am -
i about cried throughout this chapter! so good!October 15th, 2014 at 11:07pm
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I was about cry while I was reading..........Good update! we want moooore!!!October 15th, 2014 at 10:46pm
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I know I said I was getting off Mibba, but you updated, Damned if I'm late for work, this is more important.
Last chapter you had me hating Mia's mother. This chapter, you almost had me hating Mia. And let's face it - if we didn't already know her side of the story, if we were in Zack's shoes and had no idea why she'd just walked away, I would hate her. So, so much. Nobody breaks Zacky's heart and gets away with it!
I felt like this ending was perfect. It completely sums up the way that people can feel so utterly alone in the world, and it shattered my heart.
Congrats to your friend for making it through! ^_^ Also, totally jealous that you went to your first concert when you were eight! XD
Okay. Really going to get ready for work now. o.o
(As for beta-ing, thank you for the opportunity! ^_^)October 15th, 2014 at 10:41pm -
Oh my god that made me cry, and you said the hard hitting stuff is next week? I'm gonna be bawling!October 14th, 2014 at 05:24am
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@ AshleyDel28
I thought it was really important that I finally show why things were so tense between Mia and Madeline. We'll get to see her break a title in ch. 3! I'm so glad you're excited! I'm excited too! Thanks for the comment!
@ EvilPrankster
Ha! Yeah, finally! Life got a little crazy! But it's finally here!October 9th, 2014 at 05:02am
Sounds like something I would do!
You're too good to me
@ AJ9
Thank you so much! I do plan on updating again soon! Hopefully in the next two weeks!