I did like this entry, however, I found a hard time connecting the chapters, other than the fact that they all had a metaphor for butterflies inside of them. I wish you had linked the ideas together a little better because I felt like the first two chapters all had blood in them and the last one just threw me off guard. I would have liked a definite subject in each of them, like making the boy in the first chapter, the boy who she’s in love with in the last chapter. I did like each individual chapter and how each created a bit of suspense and wonder as it went on. The second chapter was great with not knowing what was going on, whose blood it was, what butterfly, and leading into a murder case.
December 18th, 2013 at 10:05pm