I Know in My Heart It's Not You - Comments

oh jesus is it really happening oh my goodness it's actually over heLP

When Hayley said that yes, Oli is her boyfriend, I cried multiple tears of happiness and squealed because guys this is what we've all been waiting for. And she gave Oli three new possible fans, aw, but the little moment they had there was just so cute and then theY HAD TO LEAVE I AM WORKING UP A LOT OF TEARS THEY ARE JUST SPILLING ONTO MY PHONE OKAY IT'S NOT GOOD. "Take care of her, alright? I know you'll maker her very happy." JoshJoshJoshJoshJosh you have effectively killed me in two sentences oh gosh how could this happen, how and why and aw and Oli not picking Hayley up and taking her to the bus...I needed that to happen, okay, but no, No Doubt needed Paramore. Sigh.

"He always kept his promises."

OH MY FRICKING JESUS THAT HURTS OW THAT MEANS IT'S TRULY OVER AAAH

D:

I have been on this ride from beginning to end and I am very excited to see more soon and I'm gonna be reading this over and over and over, I love it. You did an amazing job - of course - and I loooves it. <3

this entire story has been amazing and has made me so emotional; I can't even explain it. Hayley & Oli are such a good pairing and I'm so so glad you decided to write them together because you're so talented and the way you capture emotion through your writing is unbelievable. I honestly think that this is one of my favourite fics! I also love how you make links between this and COL, which was also amazing. I'm sad that this is over, but I'm looking forward to what else you have in store. :-)

Here's your comment love, sorry it took me some time!
Well the first thing I'll oint out is that I like the title you've given to this story, I love long titles and this one is just sweet I guess. I love the layout too, it's colours work well together and the image you've used as a banner. Also you're layout is easy to read, which is a big problem on here sometimes.

I would have never thought of pairing Hayley and Oli together, they seem kind of like opposites to me, but never the less, in this story you've made them work. I love the concern shown by the rest of Paramore towards Hayley. You captured their emotions well and to me, that's how I think a band would act if these circumstances were real.
I know someone has already said it, but I don't even care. When Oliver was listening to her sing it was the best fucking thing ever! Seriously, I loved that scene, it was the sweetest.

At the end of the first chapter when you said, ''As a matter of fact, I do.'', I thought that was really funny for some reason. Ikd why, I'm just strange hah. Overall though, this is a fantastic story, it's very well written and your descriptions are quite close to being perfect, Good job.

@ donald darko.
Thank youuu!

I didn't mean to make you cry! I'd give you tissues if I could haha.

Lee's the best. He's just concerned for Oli's feelings and stuff. 'Cause, you know, they're bros. And I adore Taylor. He cares so much for Hayley, which is why they have such a great platonic relationship. I love writing Taylor.

And writing Oli mesmerized by Hayley's singing was my favorite part tbh.

I'm glad you liked it and don't die, please! More will come soon.

do you like seeing my tears missy.

I AM CRYING.

OUCH.

AW, HELL.

When Hayley just came out and said, "No," my literal words were, "Oh, shiiit," because I sensed that something good was not coming for quite a moment. Then Oli was all confused and my heart just shattered and damn the media! Damn it to hell! I couldn't even handle the pain and feels I experienced and I'm going to just go curl in a ball and then Lee and his incessant pounding on the door. I love Lee, oh, how I love Lee.

Also Taylor. He's my favorite in this whole thing, okay, thank you. I love him.

I love the moment where Hayley's singing and Oli's just listening and thinking and admiring her and what are you doing to meee?

This was wonderful/hurtful. Agajapdnwpfnwoskw, I have died.

hi I love this!!!! The way you wrote about how well Paramore get along made me really happy because you can tell they're also best friends as well as band mates. I think it the same with BMTH, and you portray that really well.

Also, I really love Hayley and Oli as a pairing, and it's a shame that not that many people write them together. You're an extremely talented writer, though, and I'm glad that you're writing this because I'm excited to see where it goes :-)!!

I love this sososo much. I love the characterization of Hayley and Oli and the band was worried about Hayley, excuse me while I squeal because the bond of Paramore aw. The description is absolutely wonderful and it's all so great and sorry for my all over the placeness, I'm tired and running on, like, three hours' sleep. Blech.

But I have been waiting for this since you said you were going to create it anD NOW IT IS HERE OH GOSH YES THE WORLD NEEDS HAYLIVER (that's what you have dubbed it, yes?) AND LOTS OF IT.