Sweet Perfection - Comments

  • noriko.

    noriko. (330)

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    i'm sorry this is so late hahahaha

    anyway, merry christmas.

    i like the way you write your stories. how they're kind of like the thoughts of the character. i also like it how you didn't name the narrator.

    i like how it starts off kind of dark and then it's like nope HAHAhaha and has a happier ending. and even though it's short it doesn't seem like one of those perfect romance one-shots where everything is happy and positive the whole way through.

    i don't think there were any spelling errors or other mistakes in it.

    anyway, i really like this story tehe

    your one-shot is on it's way
    December 22nd, 2013 at 08:12am