Delaware - Comments

  • Harleen Winchester.

    Harleen Winchester. (100)

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    Thank you for the comment! I was wondering if I put enough back story but I wanted to keep it short and didn't know how to go about it correctly. I'm thinking about maybe posting another one about this size talking about how they met and whatnot. Glad you enjoyed it! Hug
    November 8th, 2013 at 07:22pm
  • chasingstardust

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    That was so beautifully sad. I'm really glad you finished this. I had no idea that this was from the point of view of the guitar until the last paragraph. What I loved most about this was that it kept my attention the entire time. I wanted to know more about Dela and what was happening. I loved the repetition of the word "accept" in the fourth paragraph. It really helped develop the personification of the guitar. Fantastic job!
    November 6th, 2013 at 05:41pm