Girls, Breaking Hearts - Comments

I forgot to comment on how cute john was when he hugged her and said he can't stay away. Seriously!! And then he laughed when she asked him to sleep with her, fucking adorable. Can't wait for the next!!

I'm panicking with John. Where are you Brooke?!? I hope she's fine, omg, imagine if she's in the hospital? Ok, I'll calm down. I squealed when I saw you updated 2 chapters (thank you thank you thank you)

Those flashbacks... Kldsnznjwoclsbd here I am fangirling AGAIN.

Oh... I love this story, i can't get enough of it.

I am thrilled to see what happens next!! I hope nothing serious happened to Brooke, and hopefully John finds her soon!

@zittalicious, yup! Again.
Anyway, where the hell is she?! John, find her, damnit. Is something serious going to happen? I mean, something bad? Uh-hh.
Can't wait for more <3

So @m-attie was like: go ahead and say something first so there will be some kind of space between my two comments and yada yada but it looks like she was the first one...happens all the time I'm telling ya.

Anyway, my dearest Annie. This story is pretty much everything I could ask for and more. It's addictive as hell and the whole idea makes me smile like an idiot (no joke), I mean, the age gap? A +! Plus I love how everybody keeps picturing her with Shane when she's actually John's girl. Ross should totally walk in on them though :D.

Keep writing, girl! Can't wait for more! ♥

PS. And OMG, you're 18?! The fuck? Could've sworn you were older judging by the way you write- you're amazingly talented!

It's me again, yay! Too short. TOO SHORT! But well, aren't they best? And you're so great. I solemnly swear.
Update soon! Like, right now? Ok, tomorrow?
Just keep writing ;D

OhmyfuckiingsweetO'Callaghan! I just read all chapters and... Where have you been all my life, or at least my-The-Maine-fangirling-time? Hah.
You're amazing, I swear. I laughed out loud a few times, reding your story. That moment with Shane at her house? OMG. And Halvo, aw! And Brooke and John? They're great, duh, and don't you dare to break them!
I wish I was great writer as you and....just keep writing!
Oh and me too. I mean, I request a flashback to tell us how was their first kiss.
Just keep updating <3

I thought about waiting a little to comment, so you don't think I'm addicted to this story... But I can't. This chapter was 100% cute, I will resume it with "awn". Both present and past. Brooke, dear, and all women in the world: doesn't matter what you are wearing, your reputation or the way you talk and behave: if you say no, it means no. Anything against your will is abuse.

"That’s why you have the equality sign tattoo don’t you, it’s a guy?!” OMG I'M LAUGHING OUT LOUD! Halvo is so funny!
The way John tried to deny Brooke and she thought she had no chance with him is kind of cute and comical.

Will her sister freak out? I'm excited for more chapters. John worried about ruining her first time was cute. Btw, i request a flashback to tell us how was their first kiss.

WOW! I loved the plot! Really good, really different.

this story is so great! i loved the flashback, hahaha

Wow.. me gusta :3