February 18th, 2014 at 10:06pm
Gosh, I was just nervous the whole time reading this, feeling as though anything could go wrong. You've built up the anticipation well.
"The man’s name-tag reads Greg." Just the way this is stated so simply makes it so hilarious! You know I love how you slip these moments in
And then you go from fun conversation to haunting descriptions of people in LA and how crap Freya is treated and jeez.... You just make me have so many feels with this story.
Keen to see how the heck she's going to snipe all of the guards!
Gosh, I could see them all exiting their room, walking down the hallway, and stepping into the elevator so clearly, like it's from a movie. And it has left me so excited yet nervous to find out what happens next and how this meeting goes! I really hope you update soon!
"seems like he could behead someone and then eat a sandwich" On a more serious note, I feel like you're really conveying this man well.
Yay for Freya thinking on her feet and doing her job well
I'm anxious to see how dinner goes, and the rest of their mission, so please update soon!