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  • heytheremagg

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    This is different from any other fic i've read, it's really good ^~^
    November 4th, 2013 at 04:03pm
  • SimplySoniax3

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    This is some creepy ass shit but I love it oh my god
    November 3rd, 2013 at 02:22am
  • Not-Anymore

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    @ weedandwhiskey
    Then you're like spot on man hell yeah best wishes! Hahaha
    November 3rd, 2013 at 01:55am
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    @ weedandwhiskey
    Then you're like spot on man hell yeah best wishes! Hahaha
    November 3rd, 2013 at 01:55am
  • KillAllMCR

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    @ Just_Let_Love_Be_
    You're so great omg. But yeah, in the game the girl is pretty fearless, she keeps a straight face throughout the game
    November 2nd, 2013 at 09:06pm
  • Not-Anymore

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    So hi I came to the comments to tell you that this story is going so well this far and I'm really excited to have some chaptered Jalex going on in this fanbase that isn't the same as everything else that's be(ing)en written :) Screwed up stories like this are a personal favourite of mine, so I gave it a chance even though it was Jalex because you wrote an awesome summary that even I noticed on ATFF and really pulled your readers into this fic really well. That's a talent that is very lacking these days.

    I love the dynamic you have between Jack and Alex that sort of forces your plot along. Like, in some of these horror-type fics there's no real reason for the "Jack" let's say of your story to put himself through all of this misery. However, with the soul mate, deeply in love factor you have going on here, it actually adds up and I don't find myself groaning because the main character is so stupid.

    That being said, there's one thing that I think your writing would benefit from! I've never heard of Mad Father, but is the main character as fearless as Jack? Some of his reactions are a bit unrealistic in the way that, if something grabbed my ankle for example, I'd probably scream and/or cry instead of just kicking it away. Like I said, I have no idea how Mad Father goes and maybe I'm totally off here because you have a plan, but yeah that's it :)

    Keep rocking on man, okay? This is great :)
    November 2nd, 2013 at 02:55pm
  • KillAllMCR

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    @ Taani
    It's based off a video game. Im sure if you looked it up you could see how everything is suppose to play out, the game moves quickly and has many encounters so
    October 30th, 2013 at 03:21pm
  • Taani

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    I'm so confused
    October 30th, 2013 at 03:16pm
  • curiosityroger

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    this isn't even my account i was allowed to use it to read stories (cos mibba hates me and wont resend me my password) so i dont comment on them but i had to comment on this and tell you PLEASE complete this it's beautiful already oh my fucking god i love it so much and i had to look up the game because i didn't know what it was but ohh myyyy goddd just yes okay all of the yes. this is great. - jalexaremyhomeboys on tumblr/atlaregay on livejournal (i feel like i should tell you who i am because again, this isn't my mibba account, okay sorry bye ily)
    October 30th, 2013 at 02:02am
  • alltimelesbians

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    oh hot damn
    ya know i literally considered everything that could have happened except zombies and i dont know why
    supa stoked for the next chapter yo
    this is super good okay your writing is fab just like you
    October 29th, 2013 at 03:36am
  • LivingInADaydream

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    I'm super excited for this, I loved the game and this makes me so happy now, also your writing style is wonderful. CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 2
    October 28th, 2013 at 09:07pm
  • SimplySoniax3

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    I'm really scared like Uhm????
    I don't usually read this kind of things but your writing is just so beautiful and I just ok'd I'm really interested in this one particular fic
    You have talent love <3
    October 28th, 2013 at 07:52pm
  • alltimelesbians

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    oh wow okay i usually dont read stories like this but this is supER interesting and yes YOU SHOULD UPDATE BECAUSE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TLO ALEX OKAY THANK YOU
    October 28th, 2013 at 06:31pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    listEN UP MOTHERFUCKER
    pls update i need to know is alex okay now what happens does he turn into a chimaera i bet he does doesn't he or maybe a kinda frankenstein like alice cooper does
    October 28th, 2013 at 12:23pm
  • closed_

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    Alright, chapter 2 now. Now because now. This is really interesting and I'm ready fOR CHAPTER TWO NOW
    October 28th, 2013 at 09:42am