And what a marvelous thing it is~*~*~* No, I mean it, I am thoroughly outraged that I am the first commenter on this exquisite nugget of fanfic gold. Like the lack of a frostiron/avengers shippers on this site is just bIZARRE and infuriating to me.
But anyway yeah, back to gushing over this: I'm pretty much in love with everything about it, ok, so it seems really redundant for me to list all the things I love about it- like the characterizations, the freaking ice skating tHEME (<33333), the flow, everything about Loki and everything that he does/says, the various character relationships and conflicts- but I get that that's nice for authors to hear so.
Honestly, how you succeed at portraying Loki as a disciplined ice skater (ice qUEEN omg) without making it feel crack at all is really beyond me. I'm just going to virtually slow clap that out, because jesus, that takes skill. And now I'm just really into that concept, so thanks for tHAT. Also Tony in all his engaging snarky grumpiness and standoffish curiosity is both endearing and familiar to the canon character so that's A+++++
sO YEAH, this is my comment. I feel like it's pretty aggressive and lame, and I'm sorry about that. I truly hope you continue this, but if you don't c00l [wet distant sobbing], you're still a phenomenal writer and I'd love to read more from you, because I really appreciate and admire your twist on established characters and original narrative.
No, I mean it, I am thoroughly outraged that I am the first commenter on this exquisite nugget of fanfic gold. Like the lack of a frostiron/avengers shippers on this site is just bIZARRE and infuriating to me.
But anyway yeah, back to gushing over this: I'm pretty much in love with everything about it, ok, so it seems really redundant for me to list all the things I love about it- like the characterizations, the freaking ice skating tHEME (<33333), the flow, everything about Loki and everything that he does/says, the various character relationships and conflicts- but I get that that's nice for authors to hear so.
Honestly, how you succeed at portraying Loki as a disciplined ice skater (ice qUEEN omg) without making it feel crack at all is really beyond me. I'm just going to virtually slow clap that out, because jesus, that takes skill. And now I'm just really into that concept, so thanks for tHAT. Also Tony in all his engaging snarky grumpiness and standoffish curiosity is both endearing and familiar to the canon character so that's A+++++
sO YEAH, this is my comment. I feel like it's pretty aggressive and lame, and I'm sorry about that. I truly hope you continue this, but if you don't c00l [wet distant sobbing], you're still a phenomenal writer and I'd love to read more from you, because I really appreciate and admire your twist on established characters and original narrative.