December 2nd, 2014 at 01:12am
Baby, Just Hold On - Comments
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this fic is very good, I like, please updateDecember 1st, 2014 at 06:30pm
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So heyyyyyyyyyyy.
Been some time, was getting a little lonely(idk)
Very satisfying update
Also FYI you've ruined my life with merrigreuter.
I crave it so much and theres just not enough of it and theres an incompleteness in my heart because.November 25th, 2014 at 03:01am -
@ xMareBear14x
they aren't fuckin on the first date okay
but maybe
will consider
but if u think about it ash and cacity were accidents like don't wanna overdo the accident approachNovember 24th, 2014 at 04:33pm -
@ JamieAllOver.
I mean the kid could totally be accidental you know. ;)November 24th, 2014 at 03:49pm -
@ jalex_barakarth3012
of all the things i been postin lately u choose the shittiest to get inspired by idgi
@ xMareBear14x
these things take time u kno
i'm probs gonna make them get together and have a kid soon tho tbh
and maybe an mpreg oneshot idk yetNovember 24th, 2014 at 01:53pm -
Zack is super cute and domestic and I want him and Jordan to have kids ASAP.November 24th, 2014 at 01:18pm
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i like this update idk why
i just do
inspired me to actually write something maybe that's why
thankNovember 24th, 2014 at 08:08am -
I commented because it was what you asked for on my Candy Bowl. :)November 2nd, 2014 at 11:34am
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@ silent hearts.
I keep forgetting to reply to this... Thank you much, doll! Cute is what I aim for! Get it? Like, the band? But, really, cute is what I'm best at... which is weird because I can't stand cute things... I was considering actually killing Alex and then turning it into a Zalex but I couldn't bring myself to go through with it, which is where Zack comes in. You didn't have to read the whole thing, seeing as how it's around 85,000 words, but thank you for that! I wasn't sure if I was the only one who tried to read whole stories before leaving comments. Since I'm assuming you're here for the candy bowl, I think yours was the first I went to, and I made one here after the fact! It closes in a few hours, but don't worry about it. Let me know if you want anything, too!
@ shelbyvengeance
You didn't have to comment, silly! But thank you for it--I know a lot of people are against it (I was when I started writing this, actually... a lot has changed since then...) so I always like to give a little bit of a fair-warning and let people know that they don't have to if they don't want to. Thank you, I'm actually pretty proud of how cute this is! And of course it's okay that you only read the first chapter!November 1st, 2014 at 02:32am -
I'm going to be honest and say that m-preg is definitely not my thing. However, I think this is written nicely (from what I read since it was only the first chapter. Hope you don't mind.) It's also quite adorable.October 31st, 2014 at 11:38pm
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Whoa, man. This story is amazing! And I'm generally not a fan of m-preg at all. I think my favorite line of the whole thing was definitely. "If there’s any one thing that they both want for their son, it’s that he takes after the other." Like, that's beyond cute. This whole story is beyond cute. You scared the crap out of me with Jack's dream though! I knew Alex wasn't dead because there were so many more chapters, but at the same time I was like ready to cry. And then Zack happened. Goddammit, Zack. Just, like, noooooo bro. Nah. All of the scenes that involved Pierce the Veil were also cute, and I love the connection you made with that to Adam Elmakias. That was like, crazy creative. Anyway, this is one of the best fanfiction's I've read in a long time. Great work, girl!October 25th, 2014 at 04:45pm
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@ southpaw
You make me blush, aw. Can I just hire you to tell me super nice things all the time? Can you believe that the second chapter almost didn't happen? I had it mixed in with the ending of the third chapter at first, but it went off on too many tangents and I had to ask a friend for advice on it.
@ kyle spencer
Cute is what I am for! Ha, get it? Like the band? And cute is all I'm good for. This was actually started because I went to a baby shower! Minus all of the people, everything was exactly the same! I got home (and at that time I was kind of against mpreg... look at me now...) and kinda sat on my bed and thought, "Has anyone written a baby shower one-shot... Maybe I should do that... Yeah, I'm gonna do that..." And then all of a sudden it was becoming a fic, and it's nearing 100,000 words. Thank you, love!October 24th, 2014 at 06:56am -
CAAAAAANDY BOOOOOOWL
So, this was just sickly sweet adorable. I went to a baby shower not to long ago and it was basically just like this. I really liked the nice, fun layout and I thought your style of writing was very flowing. I'm not really one for bandfictions, but this was just cute. Keep going and good luck!October 21st, 2014 at 11:40pm -
This is really cute! I liked Alex’s cake craving in the first chapter, that was really cute and gave a slice of life element to his pregnancy. So far it seems really positive and I like the uplifting tone with each chapter! I like the callback and foreshadowing to them having a child in the second chapter, it really tied the whole plot together, and the exposition was still super cute. It’s tough to make exposition not seem like filler, but you keep it relevant to the plot so that it’s not just a block of text. I was really able to understand the depth of their love for each other, and you’re absolutely awesome at showing instead of telling. It really adds to Jack and Alex as characters, developing them individually and altogether at the same time – keep up the great work! c:October 21st, 2014 at 05:21pm
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You're welcome c:
And I love all your stories c:October 19th, 2014 at 06:28pm -
@ BringMeTheFuentes
ty bae
its the only thing of mine i'm proud of neglOctober 19th, 2014 at 06:22pm -
So far this is really good! And I'm only on chapter two xDOctober 19th, 2014 at 07:20am
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@ m2meyes
aw, thank you, doll. glad to know i'm not completely hated for always taking too long to postOctober 13th, 2014 at 04:03am -
Awesome update! ^-^ I'm so happy you updated. I love this story so much.October 12th, 2014 at 03:29pm
idk why
or maybe i'm paying more attention
not sure
but they're good i like em