I wanted to start off with the fact that I enjoyed the approach you took to writing the story. I thought that you did choose some interesting words. I thought that your idea was nice, and I enjoyed the robotic feel to it overall. I thought that you did something that was outside the box, and for a contest like this, thinking outside the box is a good thing. Your spelling and summary were on point.
I think that there was room for improvement. I think you needed to weave the theme throughout a little more, and you should have made colony a little more important than the word robot.
I wanted to start off with the fact that I enjoyed the approach you took to writing the story. I thought that you did choose some interesting words. I thought that your idea was nice, and I enjoyed the robotic feel to it overall. I thought that you did something that was outside the box, and for a contest like this, thinking outside the box is a good thing. Your spelling and summary were on point.
I think that there was room for improvement. I think you needed to weave the theme throughout a little more, and you should have made colony a little more important than the word robot.
Overall, nice job.