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  • Under.An.Eclipse

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    @ HiddenVeil
    Thank you. Cute That means a lot to me. The next chapter is coming. I just have to edit it. It should be up soon.
    November 17th, 2014 at 04:37am
  • HiddenVeil

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    I really do love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
    November 13th, 2014 at 09:42pm
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    Ah, I see. That fits. ^_^

    Nice. :) Well, not everyone would choose a surname like that.

    Then have another. Cute
    November 29th, 2013 at 05:35am
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    Mine are things like James, Archie, Corey, Emery, Sky, the works. I have one character names Domino. That's because it's a sort of weird reality setting.

    He was just a member of the guard. He was a hunter. A scrawny kid, and his surname was L├Ągor, which is Swedish for "flames". So, fancy.

    I love that smiley. tehe It's cute.
    November 29th, 2013 at 05:24am
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    @ arthur dent
    My usual names in other stories are like that. Elizabeth, Grace, Laura, George, Stephan, and so on. But those names just didn't seem to fit this story.

    Very true. Interesting. Did he marry a princess? Or was the royal guard the closest he got? :)

    Ah! If you squish me to death, I can't write! Cute But luckily, I can come back from being squished.
    November 29th, 2013 at 05:17am
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    My character names are pretty boring. Common English names, nothing fancy. XD

    I'm a huge fan of fantasy, but it's always so overdone. Always about the royal family too. I wrote one about a merchant boy training in the royal guard.

    Of course. Arms tehe
    November 29th, 2013 at 04:41am
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    @ arthur dent

    Well, I was trying to make something not already in use. So I guess I have succeeded. XD Maybe...

    And that is very true. I have read many fantasy stories like that, but usually I just ignore the names. But if it gets too much that sort of ruins the story for me.

    Thank you. :)
    November 29th, 2013 at 04:31am
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    Medieval names are the darned best. I find fantasy stories overuse them though. Good on you.
    November 29th, 2013 at 04:18am
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    @ arthur dent

    Oh, thank you. I was trying to go for something like that. Cute
    November 29th, 2013 at 04:14am
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    Ooh, excited. tehe
    I adore the names and the tongue. Ethereal and light. Medieval, almost.
    November 29th, 2013 at 03:50am