Killer - Comments

@semisweet Preach!

@ odettey
I have to agree with just.add.ice

Also I'd like to point out that your tone is extremely condescending and just downright rude. If you had such an issue with it than you should have privately messaged her and voiced your concerns like an adult and not a petulant child. There's a difference between constructive criticism and outright hate. You obviously do not understand that difference. Learn it or stop commenting.

@odettey seriously, it's fan fiction. I get it if you have to put down a book - a hard copy, fact combed book - because of inconsistencies, but this is just a story. All the details don't need to be 100% accurate for it to be as fantastic as it is!

I couldn't finish reading this because of the legal inconsistencies. Murder is a criminal offense, manslaughter is murder without the intent to kill and premeditation. You CANNOT sue someone for murder!! The State (DA) brings criminal charges and penalties are jail and probation. If you want to sue someone for money, then it is a civil offense. The person suing is a plaintiff, not a prosecutor, the claim has to be something like battery, wrongful death, negligence, etc. The penalty is never jail. I realize that you are not a lawyer or even a Law & Order fan, but these are two drastically different things with important implications.

Loved it, honey! They're so sweet, I have a feeling they'll pull through this if they stick together.

Have to have the sequel amazing.

Anyone else feel like gutting the parents with Sidney's skates?

Her parents will be revealed as incompetent monsters eventually, I hope:)

How did I not know that you were going to end it so soon. I'm going to follow how ever long I need to with this one. I surely hope that he gets his bail posted and then he wins the case cause god knows her mother is a little liar. I could have smacked her so hard that she wouldn't have been able to see straight.
-S

I love this. That is all.

I'm so upset

I'm so glad that he didn't tell her parents yes and that he told her about her parents. I'm just so sad that there's the possibility that they could not be together. I mean look at them they're perfect together. Maybe she'll pay her parents the money and say its from Sidney. I hate her parents so much but I'm so glad they've realized they love each other can't wait for more.
-S

Good for Sidney telling her parents NO DEAL!!! And good for her staying true to Sidney:)

Agh, I'm finally caught up on this story and I want to set fire to Annie's parents. I just had such a terrible feeling when they said that Sidney had visitors... Job well done, lady! This is easily one of my favorite stories.

i want to kill her parents. like they need to freaking go away. I'm reading this and i got so heated, its like they're real people and i want to bitch slap them both!!!

I can't believe her parents are that serious about having money does their daughter mean anything to them? I mean seriously they have been no where this whole time. I hope Annie goes and visits him in jail and finds out what they have done and somehow he gets out of jail because it was getting happy and i liked it but i feel like if it gets happy its over and i'm not sure I want that.

Oh my godddddd please tell me this is going to get happy again I don't' want too cry of sadness anymore!!! Please update this is sooooo good

ASAP!!! Lol.

Love this story. Omg !! Please write sequel USA.

I'm growling at you right now. Like deep growling with a big sigh. Seriously why did Jeff have to go and do that was it him who pressed the charges? you can't leave me like that I might become a psychopath reader and freak out about the fact that he made an accident into a court case. oh lord i'm so attached to this that I feel that it's real.