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i know this is late late but sequel if you still exist on here so im not lonely

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL man is that hard to spell

billies a butt-head killed me why is that so funny

Please make an sequel, this was amazing!

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I love Green Day, so I'm happy you decided to write about it but I have some critiques. The layout is too plain for me. But also the writing comes off a bit, telling and not showing. Description is everything and your lack of it comes of a bit ranty. I think this could be better if you used italics and separated things too, it is just too plain. It really is something nice but your use of vulgarity in the internal parts is just too much. Vulgarity/cursing is like jewelry, if you wear too much it gets clunky and doesn't look right

But don't stop writing.

a sequel will be coming soon!!!

this is a great story and i hope to see a sequel soon (:
This story is really action packed, haha. almost like an episode of EastEnders ;) Anyway, i hope to see a sequal because I'd like to know what happens next :3

Sequel??? :3

Awesome chapter. Personally, I think Billie boy is a little floozy, and Trish is gonna end up singing "Thnks fr th Mmrs" as she walks right out the door. But you never know, so update soon friend :)

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Loved it. Even though I want to beat the shit out of drunk Billie, I loved it. Update soon friend :)

Nice!!

Well shit that escalated quickly. Update soon friend:)

OMG RAGE QUIT ON BILLIE AND EVERYTHING HE LOVES. God I love this story. Update soon friend :)

This is SO GOOD KEEP UPDATING I LOVE IT <3

love it so far!

COOL!!!

GREAT! now don't stop updating!!! :))

AWESOME! update soon!!!