Well... That was depressing.. And also fantastic, you details with her thought process was a solid hook! I mean the scene was brief and an almost simple situation. But her emotions, her anticipation, her dread, her smiling facade! I felt it all! It was so palpable (the tension with the door). *Gasps for air then clears throat* I mean.... This was good
And also fantastic, you details with her thought process was a solid hook! I mean the scene was brief and an almost simple situation. But her emotions, her anticipation, her dread, her smiling facade! I felt it all! It was so palpable (the tension with the door). *Gasps for air then clears throat* I mean.... This was good