Santa Stole My Boyfriend - Comments

  • fifthghost

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    @ JamieAllOver.
    :(

    He's a fragile little soul and Alex was his first real love, cut him some slack. I mean, he does seem a bit pathetic, I guess, but he's like a sick kitten. He needs tender care and love to improve.

    Literally every chapter I'm so tempted to just be like DAMN IT ZACK I'M GOING TO BRING ALEX BACK SO HE CAN PET YOUR HAIR AND KISS YOUR NOSE but I must stay strong because it's planned out to the very last detail and Alex still needs a turn of being a sniveling idiot.
    January 2nd, 2014 at 02:13am
  • JamieAllOver.

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    i want to feel bad for zack but i just can't like m8 it's over you need to stop.

    he actually reminds me of my rian tho negl she's still upset about a girl that broke up with her like 2 months ago i just you gotta move on now it's what's meant to be
    January 2nd, 2014 at 01:59am
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    @ thanksforjackbarakat
    I know, but I feel bad that Alex was only trying to do good and it's all backfiring on him. :(

    I'm getting sad at my own story. New low.
    January 1st, 2014 at 03:34am
  • jagksexual

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    @ brxndneweyes oh I definitely sympathise for him! I want to cuddle and zack and smoosh them and let them cry on me but I'm also angry at him because dammit zacks sensitive and shy and yeah
    January 1st, 2014 at 01:23am
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    @ xXMandaWayXx
    I know! But, if Alex just jumped back into his arms, we wouldn't have a story. ;-)

    Haha, never fear, everything is going to work out.

    Thank-you for reading!
    December 31st, 2013 at 04:58pm
  • xXMandaWayXx

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    This chapter makes me want to cry for Zack... I just want them to get back together!
    December 31st, 2013 at 04:51pm
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    @ thanksforjackbarakat
    NO. WRONG REACTION. I need people to sympathise with him, especially with the little part about how he was saying he tried to be good about leaving Zack and he didn't want to hurt him and he felt guilty. I mean, okay, he's going to come across as a bit of an idiot later on in the story, but he's not a bad guy.

    He probably wants to punch himself for making Zack cry because he still cares about him so much.

    Thank-you for reading! xo
    December 31st, 2013 at 03:10pm
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    @ Jalex_stronghammer
    WELL I NEED YOU TO ACTUALLY CRY. Kidding, glad you read it. xo
    December 31st, 2013 at 03:07pm
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    This makes me want to punch Alex
    December 31st, 2013 at 11:36am
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    yo eve i almost cried
    not cool
    December 31st, 2013 at 06:22am
  • fifthghost

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    @ alltimelesbians
    I know! Poor baby.

    Happy ending talk = foreshadowing.

    Thanks for reading it! xo
    December 31st, 2013 at 05:58am
  • alltimelesbians

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    wo w eve
    zack is so fucking cute and my whole body hurts for him wow
    i like this chapter a lot
    December 31st, 2013 at 05:23am
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    @ brokenpromise
    Thank-you! It's all sad for Zack a lot of the time but all the talk of happy endings wasn't for nothing. :-)
    December 31st, 2013 at 04:54am
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    zacks part made me sad aw this is a great story idea though :-)
    December 31st, 2013 at 04:53am
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    @ thanksforjackbarakat
    Hopefully not too much! <3
    December 21st, 2013 at 01:34am
  • jagksexual

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    I can tell this is gonna hurt but I love it
    December 21st, 2013 at 12:13am
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    @ alltimelesbians
    Thank-you! I don't think as of yet it has specified age but, I'm going by eras. 2009!Alex, so about twenty-two. Same for Jack. Zack's a little younger. It mentions his blonde hair, so, SWIR!era. I imagined him to be nineteen, I think.

    I can't remember my own chapter plan, omfg, I don't think you do MEET meet Jack. There will be a bit more of him but the Jalex is minimal. Jack isn't the bad guy anyways, none of them really are.
    December 11th, 2013 at 04:30am
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    @ brokenpromise
    Yay! I wanted him to be a little sweetheart. <3
    December 11th, 2013 at 04:26am
  • alltimelesbians

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    this is so cute omf
    Zack is really adorable in this
    i might have missed it but how old are they in this?
    i cant wait to like, meet meet jack OOoooOh
    December 11th, 2013 at 04:03am
  • brokenpromise

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    Super super cute :-) zack is adorable in this
    December 11th, 2013 at 04:00am