March 9th, 2015 at 02:54am
I will admit, even now, I still have a soft spot for fairy tales and princesses. Also, the title drew me in. I like it :)
I love the layout, it's simple, elegant and it definitely holds what the story is about.
I like how you kicked off the first chapters, adding some mystery by including her grandmother's locket and the undesirable Prince Henry. I'm terrible at writing summaries, but I like how you wrote yours. It hints at a plot in the works. I think your characters are very unique, maybe a little more character development will occur in future chapters? Or maybe background information on them. I am a sap for royalty stories, so I absolutely love where this one is going and I'm excited to read more. I can't think of any other advice to give, you've got it all down pretty good. Great job! I look forward to the next update
The layout is also lovely. It's elegant and matches what the story is about.
I don't often read royalty stories; I usually find them boring or unoriginal, but this one has my attention. It's a very well-written and entertaining read.