In the Sound - Comments

So glad you told me about this story, I can't wait to see where you take it from here! :)

Your writing is amazing! Haha, "I need you to sleep with my dog." That was hilarious. I can't wait until you update! Such a great story!

I need you to sleep with my dog. that is the funniest thing that I've read all day (ignore the fact that my day is just starting) and it made me laugh hard enough for my currently sickness to hurt me.

I love that Nora had enough balls to go on an try to ask him for a favor after she knocked him the fuck out! It's nice to see that she values Kit over her own pride. As for Daryl being an intimidating bastard, my glob, I can jut feel the awkwardness that's radiating off Nora. It's an unpleasant feeling.

Just gonna say it straight up! A chapter filled with laughs! Banjo!! Hahaha Daryl playing a banjo! And the fact she assumed he had seen her and used the book as a shield! Not a lot of stories can make me laugh, but you have effortlessly done so!

Poor Nora! Shes so helpless! I just want to give her a hug!

Im so glad that you have given Daryl his intimidation. Though Nora was undoubtedly awesome when she gave Daryl a piece of her fist, I would be mighty disappointed if she was this 'hardened badass'. I like that her fearless act came out of revenge for Kit, and that every move thereafter is for him.

Once again you have left me wanting more with your damn cliff hangers!! Looking forward to tomorrow!

hashahahahahahah i need you to sleep with my dog!
oh gosh
great update(s) (didnt know about number 8 lol)

I quite like this.

I don't quite know what I was expecting when I started reading, but I thought the writing was great in the first chapter, straight through to the last one you have posted.

First, I have to say that I love that Nora has a dog. And I hope you know, now that you've introduced Kit, you can't kill him. Sorry.

I like the rocky start that Nora has with the group. It's refreshing. And she's quite independent, but in a way that isn't like a no-personality-badass. She walks the middle line very well, which I appreciate.

And Daryl. Oi. What a dick, haha. But a lovable one. I'm curious to see how they'll develop as they get to know each other.

Great job with this! :3

I'm starting from where I left off!

The way you're writing this is just so amazing! Usually in a fan fiction, you would find (if the story is based on the original storyline) that the story begins to follow a little too closely. The way you have set this out shows particular points that tell you where you are in the series, and yet it feels like its own story in itself. You haven't just shoved a character in the series, you have carefully manipulated the story so that she fits in.

I love the way you have written each character. Their little habits, the expressions and appearance is so spot on that I can literally imagine them acting and saying what you are telling them to say. Rick, in particular has been my favourite, and Carol most recently has caught my attention (though I don't like her in the series).

'Rick rubbed his growing stubble a little.'
'He brought his hand up in a stopping gesture again, and I guessed that he picked this up as a cop.'

The fact that you are interpreting his specific habits, and even picking where it may have originated is very clever. It makes me feel like I know him a little more.

'I didn’t know if he was angry. Confused. Surprised? Did hicks feel anything but stupid?'

I LOL'd so hard! Just the stereotype gets me every time! You can tell she analyses people, judging them the way she probably picked up from her Dad.

Those little personal touches are what make this story so much more interesting. It gives the characters more soul, giving them the form of a 3D character which I find can often lack in stories these days.

I love the emotion that is drawn from the relationship between Nora and Kit. The rivalry between Nora and Daryl. Even the stressed acquaintance between Nora and Herschel. It is exactly what we need to see. A fan fiction protagonist that doesn't focus on Daryl, but every one else as well, and who they become to Nora alone.

I cried when Nora came in to see Kit alive. Her raw happiness is heart wrenching and so believable. I felt like if she lost her dog, I was losing mine. You have literally put my thoughts into Nora.

I'm so excited about this story and where it is going. How you're weaving your story into the plotline is beautiful. I can't wait to meet the rest of the group. In particular, I'm keen to see Daryl's reaction when he wakes up and the interaction that happens between them in regards to sleeping arrangements.

Very, very amusing!

Can't wait to see more!

Ugh! You can't just leave it like that! Lol

It's the least Daryl could do for Nora to let her dog, the one he shot, stay in his tent while he healed up. He owes her that much at least.

Daryl not gonna be amused....

Hola! I'm here from my giveaway :)

I've never seen an episode of The Walking Dead so hopefully I can do this comment justice.

I really like how the interaction in the beginning was human-animal. For whatever reason I thought it was human-human at first until you said K-9 xD I'm a little ehhh about the fragments. It went well in the first chapter, but it doesn't match the narrator's voice in the next couple of chapters.

Chapter three: Y'ALL ARE MESSING WITH MY FEELS! Poor Kit :( I... I can't.

Even though I'm uneducated when it comes to The Walking Dead, I'll be subscribing. I rec'd it too by the way :) I left off at the end of Chapter 3, so off to the next chapters I go!

well, lucky for you! im thoroughly enjoying this story!! i dont comment much usually so dont expect novels out of me every time you update haha itll usually be "great update" or something. but i do really like this story, and i like the sound of 'frequent' updates :-) THEYRE THE BEST KIND OF UPDATES!!!

Whoa, hold up, did that really just happen?! Does the slapper even realize that Daryl, as much as I love that little shit, totally deserved to have his ass handed to him? And by a girl! You have to admit that her punches were perfectly executed and that his shooting a dog is something he shouldn't have gotten away with! Well... In this case.

Chapter Two: Grimes

I WAS RIGHT!!! Damn. Yes! Haha. I was right that it was Rick behind her. Even with a hurt paw, Kit is dangerous. Glad Rick knew to put his gun away when Nora told him to. I see that you brought in a question from season four. Nice.

Chatper Three: Arrow

I'm sorry what? I had to re-read the last part over and over...my mind couldn't seem to grasp what had just happened. Did Daryl just shoot and kill Kit?! What the hell! Oh...oh my heart. Oh my heart is racing now.

Chapter Four: Shaggy

"You. Such a powerful word.

Oh goodness, I hope Nora's punch lands it's mark and actually hurts Daryl to an extent. I can't believe he actually shot the poor dog. Damn. Must have been the gunshot Andrea gave him in the head.

Chapter Five: Dead

Bahaha! Knocked his ass out cold!

Did hicks feel anything but stupid? Rofl! I love your humor is this. My word. Shit, you have me cracking up.

Chapter Six: Peace

Oh thank Kami! Kit made it...well so far. I've only just read the "he's gonna be just fine" part. Don't play with my heartstrings like that. Lol. Haha, spare room in Daryl's tent. Yeah, I can see that happening.

Chapter Seven: Gunshots

Daryl is Carol's Pookie. I'm not at all surprised she slapped Nora. But, I don't know what to expect from Nora of what her reaction is going to be.
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This is a great story. I hope to see an update soon. I'll be checking in every morning frequently as I do with everyone else's. :P Sorry this was so long. Nah, I'm not sorry at all.

Wait just a damn minute. Who in the hell slapped Nora!? You have got to update soon! Your writing is absolutely amazing and I love Nora's character. When she hit Daryl and knocked him out...it was just awesome. Please update! I can't wait for more :)

I've only read the first chapter so far, but am commenting now and will comment again after the last posted chapter.

I love your imagery! My excitement pricked up when I began reading this. It's hard to find Walking Dead stories out there that can make tingles go down my spine. I am actually wanting to end this comment early so that I can continue on with reading the rest of the chapters.

I only spotted a few errors, but nothing that stood out and distracted me from reading.

Minutes. Hours. Definitely not days. I love that so much.

Speaking of it, at the end of this chapter, you write of the person behind her having a pistol...I can only think of Rick when I read that part. It'll be sweet to see if I am right or not in the next or so chapter.

Keep up the amazing work! I am going to subscribe and recommend this great story. :)

Ahh! I like your style of writing :) can't wait to see what happens next!

Amazing writing with very few errors. I am impressed by your writing and storytelling talent! You really created a great character and I was attached quickly.
However, I just witnessed my dogs death a few days ago and this story brought up a lot of it, so it's hard for me to really put together my thoughts. Just know that I totally enjoyed the plot so far and I adore that she confront Daryl with so much force. That stuck out to me because I know I would do just the same thing. So many girls are portrayed as weak in stories, but she just punches him right the face like it's nothing.
I'm definitely subscribing so that I can come back and read this over and take it in a bit more without a cloud of grief hanging over me. I'm sorry I couldn't provide with much insight with this comment. I'm just glad Kit was okay! I'll try and come back in a while and give you a proper comment! xx poison

I'm so glad Kit is okay! Can't wait for the update... especially to see if she stays in Daryl's tent! :]

I couldn't help but laugh at how spot on you described Daryl. Honestly, when you look at him, yeah, you immediately think hick. You don't just look at him and think he's cocky, sexy, miss understood and all that bullshit most people say when describing him. The fact that Nora acknowledges him by his looks, and immediately stereotypes him as stupid is actually quite hilarious to me. It's like a breath of fresh air for them to meet each in such a frustrating way!

Geez, Nora is flawless to me. I love that she had the guts to knock him out! The fact that she could even work up the nerve to do it is awesome. I'm really eager to see what happens when he wakes up. Wonder what's going through his head during all that! Like, what the fuck is going to go through his head when he wakes up, what he'll shall he unleash?!

Love the story, the update, your writing! Fantastic chapter :)