Until the End of Me - Comments

Ugh I can tell Esa is going to give me stomachaches! But please do continue I love this one!

Regardless of what you originally had planned for this chapter I liked what you did with this one. Will be interesting to see how what happens with her step mother though.

Thanks for the shout out :) I'm really excited for more of this story!!

Very glad to see this updated! Loved these chapters and very excited for what's to come

More already! I like this....... ANOTHERN!!

sooo I just found this and really love it! (like I love your kili and newest fili story )
i've always liked loki- not just because he's so darn pretty (hahaha)
do not like her father, step mom and sister.. ugh! they're up to something real bad.. i swear it.. but hopefully loki will keep a watchful eye on her..
and thor.. he's just so big and loud.. (adorable)
fandral.. will no skirt be left alone??

but.. loki.. he's so sweet! esp. when he's confused by his own actions and thoughts..

Oh how beautifully you write!!
Thank you for this lovely update; I am excited to see more of Loki and Elizabeth, and how Loki will react to Thor's teasing for his crush, and what the "evil step-mother" has in mind. Thank you sooooo much for this wonderful story!

Oh how beautifully you write!!
Thank you for this lovely update; I am excited to see more of Loki and Elizabeth, and how Loki will react to Thor's teasing for his crush, and what the "evil step-mother" has in mind. Thank you sooooo much for this wonderful story!

I thought you did a great job with this chapter and the update was more than worth it :) I love how Elizabeth and Loki interact with each other.

Oh and regarding the spelling mistakes etc, I would normally pick something like that up but obviously didn't look close enough. Will let you know in future if it happens again though.

I'm in love with this story! It's absolutely wonderful. And you write very well. Can't wait for the next update! (And congrats on your straight A's :] )

I had to subscribe to this as I've enjoyed the chapters you've posted so much! Elizabeth is an interesting character and I really like how it's different to most stories involving Loki, Thor etc to what I've read.

I can't wait for you to update it!! :)

I've only just found this story today, but I cannot get enough of it. I love how you've been able to keep everyone so in character. You've done a fantastic job in portraying Loki, especially. This is also one of the few stories i've read where the female OC character is interesting and seems completely human. You've done a fantastic job building her character as well. I'm curious to see the direction in which you take this story. So I'll be sure the keep up with the updates, and write some reviews in the future!

You've got me hooked.

I do really live this story and the lighter, yet still mysterious, side if Loki. I look fireward to more and congrats on the grade.

Love it! :)

I like this a lot so far!! I'm only recently letting myself get into Loli stories, but this one I definitely enjoy! Can't wait for more!!!

Dammit!!
Soooo many emotions again. And Loki shows some secret feelings, too.
I so love it!!!

It just got serious. I would of passed on meeting my dad for the first time to spend time with Loki in the gardens.

Great great done. I really love it. Although it'll take longer for the next upcoming chapters, I'm so excited.
Don't feel forced to hurry, take all time you need. I bet it'll be amazing to read - over and over again.

wauw, this is just perfect! i love it!!

I love this story and the mystery of Loki. When will there be more scenery of the two together? I look foreward to more of the story. As in checking my email non stop.

I am loving this. I look forward to more.