Uncharted Territory - Comments

Isn't it "As long as we both shall live till death do us part" ? Where's the rest?! I want more story :'(

But I'm so glad they got their happy ending!! So sequel, new story?? What amazing thing can I expect from you next?

Isn't it "As long as we both shall live till death do is part" ? Where's the rest?! I want more story :'(

But I'm so glad they got their happy ending!! So sequel, new story?? What amazing thing can I expect from you next?

I read that entire thing in an hour and a half, phone on the charger and all (I absolutely couldn't put it down!) this story just warms my heart. I find myself smiling uncontroably at how cute these two are (and destined if you ask both Mrs. Hutch and I lol)
Josh treats Erin like glass and I love to see it. Can't wait to see what their story becomes and the pace they they are progressing is perfect, not too fast or slow it just suits their backstory.
LOVE LOVE LOVE
Update soon!!!

Well damn, that was the cutest 3 hours of my life! (I'm a quick reader, not saying that your writing is terrible). I love the characters, I started off reading it thinking that it was a sequel but then realised it wasn't, which to be honest made me a little sad that I wouldn't have more to read, but then as I read further I could tell that this was a story in its own right... I absolutely loved it and I can not wait to read more!

Hi Katie!
I really really love Erin, and Josh is adorable as well. This is such a simple and sweet story. But I’ll admit, Natalie pissed me off the moment she entered, in the very beginning of the story.
The layout is cute in this one too, and I love the simplicity of your writing, its so gripping, and makes the story all the more enchanting. Your portrayal of characters is also so beautifully done. I simply loved this story as well!
As much as I like everything about the story, there’s one thing that annoyed me (very little though) - and that was the characters pressing their lips. They seemed to do it after every two lines. LOL, I know I’m being a snob, but just thought I’d tell you for amusement haha
Definitely recommending and subscribing, keep up the great work! :)

dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so cute and boo for one more chapter :(

Sorry for the multiple posts. My computer kind of freaked out.

The first thing I'm going to say is that I love Josh Hutcherson. He is just so adorable. So you kind of have me lured into your story partly because of that.

The way you opened up the story is really good, and it makes me want to continue to read further. I can't help but feel the emotions of the main character. And honestly, who hasn't been in a situation like that? Where someone likes someone else, but they are with someone else. It always nice to be able to relate the characters.

I'm not sure if what is going to happen with Josh and Erin, but I do like his introduction. Of course, I don't really know about Natalie. She seems like she will be the villian of the story.

I like Josh's mom. I found it adorable when she mentioned that she thought that Erin and Josh were the ones getting married. I just thought I would mention that.

I like the part where Josh is asking Erin about his doubts with the marriage. It seems like a normal thing to do. I just really like that part. Then he tells her that he had a crush on her. I don't know what to say about that, but it's adorable. And then the moment is ruined by Natalie.

Yeah, I knew Natalie was the villian. Her cheating on Josh just proves that. Sorry, I'm getting a little excited about this story. I really like it.

If I wasn’t almost positive my phone was sitting at that bar, I would’ve stayed at far away as possible, but I couldn’t avoid him any longer. The 'at' before far away needs to be 'as'.

I really like this story. I actually am going to read more of this because it is that amazing.

The first thing I'm going to say is that I love Josh Hutcherson. He is just so adorable. So you kind of have me lured into your story partly because of that.

The way you opened up the story is really good, and it makes me want to continue to read further. I can't help but feel the emotions of the main character. And honestly, who hasn't been in a situation like that? Where someone likes someone else, but they are with someone else. It always nice to be able to relate the characters.

I'm not sure if what is going to happen with Josh and Erin, but I do like his introduction. Of course, I don't really know about Natalie. She seems like she will be the villian of the story.

I like Josh's mom. I found it adorable when she mentioned that she thought that Erin and Josh were the ones getting married. I just thought I would mention that.

I like the part where Josh is asking Erin about his doubts with the marriage. It seems like a normal thing to do. I just really like that part. Then he tells her that he had a crush on her. I don't know what to say about that, but it's adorable. And then the moment is ruined by Natalie.

Yeah, I knew Natalie was the villian. Her cheating on Josh just proves that. Sorry, I'm getting a little excited about this story. I really like it.

If I wasn’t almost positive my phone was sitting at that bar, I would’ve stayed at far away as possible, but I couldn’t avoid him any longer. The 'at' before far away needs to be 'as'.

I really like this story. I actually am going to read more of this because it is that amazing.

Please update this!!! It's amazing!!!

D'aw, this was cute.

THE TABLOIDS OH MY GOD NOW

THE TABLOIDS OH MY GOD NOW

*thumbs up* waiting for more <3

This chapter is super duper cute! I loved it!

“I already it,” he said after I explained the article to him.

I noticed that minor error and I think he was supposed to have said 'I already read it'.

I liked that, short an sweet

Oh my goodness, I am dying inside. This is pure sweetness, I love this.
And you write beautifully and Josh is just lusciousness <3

Everyone is just dying of the cuteness :P
Update soon!<3

Everyone is just dying of the cuteness :P
Update soon!<3

I think josh would be the best cuddler ever that chapter was so cute!