Deck the Halls - Comments

@ castiel's vessel
Thank you so much!

Here from the Magazine's contest!

I like how that even though it's set in a story's world and between two different chapters it's easy to read for someone who doesn't read the story and doesn't know the background leading up to the scene. It's really good when an author can do something like that and work it really well.

I love how they decided to dress up as Thor and Loki and their friends as Batman and Robin! That was my favourite bit! The whole DC vs Marvel standoff that have is brilliant and I found myself smiling the whole time. The way you write does a good job at making the reader want to know whether this is normal for the characters and if not, how they normally act and see how the relationships that are apparent begun or ended. After all it seems like you just took a snippet of a scene of their life to show in a way to entice the reader to find out everything before and after the scene. It's great!

This was a nice read and I think you did a great job with this piece. I really enjoyed reading it.

@ kim wonshik.
Thank you so much! Waking up to this comment was seriously the best thing ever! I appreciate it and I'm so happy that someone else liked it enough to say something. :)

First off, I haven't read a fic mentioning Bam in FOREVER! Needless to say, I was so happy to read this! It was very good! I love how you set the scene at the beginning and how you give some nice descriptions to show what's going on. I thought it was nice how you mentioned Aimee's cheeks were still a little pink and red and thought it gave a nice vision! The dialogue is very natural and flowing and it's clear to see that the group is very tight-knit and just so close to one another. I think you capture Bam's personality quite nicely and all of your characters are very interesting! I loved how you wrote about it being Marvel vs DC all over again! That was epic! I think you make the reader want to know more and that you did a great job with this! Keep up the good work!

Lol, it gave me many laughs! I loved it!!! Loved the flow, the details of a winter Christmas to place I have never been and again, how depict the people so well. Thank you for the laughs and fantastic writing. <3