The Balcony Scene - Comments

@ Preciadology
Hahaha I love that you brought that up, that's so awesome! No no no, it will not end up like Who Are You Now. I hope to not end a story like that again, that was depressing af. To be honest, back in the day I simply wrote very obsessive characters. It's a little weird lol, but yeah this one is just a regular, non-psychotic high school romance.

But thank you so much, I'm glad you like it :)

@ daemonium
Thanks, I'm glad you think so :)

this isn't going to end up like 'who are you now' isn't it? because vic seems just as obsessed with kellin here than in it. anyway i love this a lot and i love your word choice and descriptions and aghhh ilyy

this is so awesomely written!

@ Otaku405
Thank you so much :)

OMG this was my fav chapter so far! I just loved the wording of the whole thing! I loved reading it!

@ MCRfreakanime
lol you know me better than that ;) It takes like a goddamn year for anything to happen in my stories hahaha

@ BoountyWarrior
Thank you!! Haha yeahh I can't imagine it too well either, I'm not quite sure why I picked that song for this scene tbh

I can't wait for them to kiss, I really thought it was gonna happen by the end of this chapter with the way Vic was thinking about Kellin lol

I finally found an high school story that is not depressing, thank god!
Like the chapter btw. Vic is so horny, it's really funny hahaha. I saw this video when Kellin does Super Mario in beat-box, and I could hear it in my head when I read that part (: But I find it hard to imagine Kellin sing "Bulletproof Love", I can only hear Vic -.-

@ BoountyWarrior
Aw thank you so much for the detailed comment, that's awesome :)

@ MCRfreakanime
Thank you so much :)
And yesss I'm so excited!!

This chapter was awesome! It's really great to discover the different characters little by little. I think I'm gonna love Hayley. And your Jaime is sooo cool (well actually real Jaime is also really cool). Man, how he puts Andy in his place! But I like this cocky (but nice) Andy too :) I love when the secondary characters are a bit important, it makes the history much funnier!

That chapter was so great I had to read it a few times haha (ps I read your comments on my one shots and they actually made me smile for a really long time, thank you, and I have a couple more kinky one shots that I might write and upload soon)

@ thanksforjackbarakat
Awesome! I'm glad you liked it :)

@ daemonium
Hell yeah!

This is my favourite chapter too c:

yay new update!

@ daemonium
Thank you!!

I love this so much