September 1st, 2015 at 12:34pm
Seriously though, this was amazing! You did a great job! As you can tell, you totes freaked the shit out of me.
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Okay, so there's like this smudge or something on my laptop's screen (shame on me for not taking care of it lol) and I was reading Satoru's looks at the end. I just happened to look and see the smudge, it looked like the beginning of a face so I kinda freaked out and punched my laptop.
Seriously though, this was amazing! You did a great job! As you can tell, you totes freaked the shit out of me. July 25th, 2014 at 11:47am -
I’m here as intern judge for this contest
Good? You think this was good? Girl! This was AMAZING! I'm still like freaking out here. Wow! Well I definitely love this story. It had me kinda scared the whole time I was reading. I'm not really into reading horror or mysteries stories because I someone that prefers to actually see it as in movies and such because I sometimes think that the details are not as precise as if you are watching them. But, this story is amazing because what I thought writers couldn't do, you did! You managed to give every little details of everything that makes any reader actually visualize the words they are reading and I believe that was great.
This can easily be made into a horror movie or something. (I'd definitely watch it) I loved every word because it drew me more and more in reading it. The touch of the "ritual" was amazing and the end was just phenomenal. There is nothing more scary than ghostly or demon like children and it was just brilliant. Great story! I just loved it.July 25th, 2014 at 02:21am -
This made me peed in my pants. Well, not literally but holy smokes, this is brilliantly scary!December 31st, 2013 at 03:17pm
I loved the build-up of suspense and it was also something entirely new for me to read because I'd never heard of this ritual before.
I didn't think your description of the boy was too much; I actually thought it was quite brief but nicely so because it only mentioned things which thrill or scare us such as blood dripping, no eyes, a creepy smile etc. Nice work!