I love how down to earth Violet is. I like that she recognizes there are some consequences to being in love with your best friend, even if she can't help those feelings. I also think it's endearing how much she tries to deny her feelings for Tom. Poor girl is just hopelessly in love!
thank god you finally updated! i like the whole friends with benefits thing, nice twist ^^ but i feel so bad for violet :( sorry if i made any mistakes btw, still working on my english :)
was reading your other Tom story, "Whirlwind " and saw you mention this other one you were working on....well here I am lol
I'm really liking the plot so far, not to mention that the layout for the story is amazing. I liked the fact that Tom actually had a girlfriend, that was a realistic detail haha I mean cause someone just so perfect can't be single all the time. While they arrived at the party I was suprised his gf cheated on him, lol didn't see it coming (till he went upstairs looking for him)
but good thing he found her in the act, even though that left him heartbroken. I hope he didn't just use Violet as a rebound. anyways.... I'm subcribing! and hoping you update soon again, cause I'm looking foward to reading more of these two. well done so far :)
Awww this was a sad one :( I feel so bad for Violet. That would be so hard to love someone and be vulnerable with them especially after how he acted the next morning! Hopefully he'll come to his senses and realize he took advantage of her feelings in the moment.
Oh god I can't imagine being in an unrequited love relationship with Tom. That would be too hard because he's too perfect and just ugh. And Sophie might possibly be the dumbest person in the world. And just, ugh. I'm having too many feelings about this story right now.
yayyy I'm glad they finally had a chance to act on their feelings but I'm worried Tom did it out of pain and will regret it later. They are so cute though so I'm hoping it works out :) Thanks for updating!
Uh oh all kinds of mischief and naughty stuff going on in this chapter. I had a feeling Sophie was going to cheat at some point but definitely wasnt expecting it so soon, I like that you caught me by surprise. I hope Tom loves Violet the way she does him But I know it's gonna be more complicated than that (which is good, I love reading drama). Really liking this story
I get the feeling that their relationship won't be all that simple. The detail is great and well written, in my personal opinion there's just the right amount. Just like your Pete Wentz story, this one has really captured my attention. The whole best friend's thing did it for me.
I'll be following this one as well because I really want to see this unfold. Great job! :)
I'm so glad to see an update for this story! I really like where it's going and the added drama of Tom's gf. I hope they get together obviously so it will be fun to see where you take it :)
I'm a huge fan of stories about best friends because it's just so touching, you know? I love the relationship between Tom and Violet, by the way.
Gosh, I just want to push their faces together and say "NOW KISS." Something like that.
I'm so jealous of their intimate relationship with each other (I think I mentioned this already?) In addition to the perfection that is this story, it's almost grammatically perfect!
He went back to the couch and sat down, watching Violet struggling with a corkscrew to get the bottle open. Struggling should be struggle instead, in order to match the tense.
You, my dear, have reached perfection with this story.
By the way, to tell the truth, I found this story while I was going on my daily routine/job everyday and read it right then and there (practically forgetting the pile of work that I had). But I'm a silent reader by nature so I didn't comment on it. Then, unfortunately, I forgot the title until you commented on my blog and I read the story again. Now I was able to comment! Yay for yay!