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  • Doctor.Vengeance

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    Wo0! Tom seems so vain and violet should realise that kyle is quite lovely
    November 5th, 2014 at 09:17am
  • Katie Mosing

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    I love how down to earth Violet is. I like that she recognizes there are some consequences to being in love with your best friend, even if she can't help those feelings. I also think it's endearing how much she tries to deny her feelings for Tom. Poor girl is just hopelessly in love!
    October 2nd, 2014 at 02:35am
  • Fearful

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    thank god you finally updated! i like the whole friends with benefits thing, nice twist ^^ but i feel so bad for violet :( sorry if i made any mistakes btw, still working on my english :)
    June 27th, 2014 at 11:47pm
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    Oh joy! I'm so happy you updated! I want to see violet get with kyle because Idk I want drama! Hope you're well! Xx
    June 27th, 2014 at 03:49am
  • RocknRollBlondii

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    Well this is going to lead down an interesting path. I can't wait to see where you take this. It could go so many ways.
    April 11th, 2014 at 07:11pm
  • WriteMeALoveLetter

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    yay you updated! awwww so they just sleep together how cute (? haha. Tom you dirty lad.... update again soon please I wanna read more! love this <3
    April 9th, 2014 at 01:45am
  • WriteMeALoveLetter

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    was reading your other Tom story, "Whirlwind " and saw you mention this other one you were working on....well here I am lol

    I'm really liking the plot so far, not to mention that the layout for the story is amazing. I liked the fact that Tom actually had a girlfriend, that was a realistic detail haha I mean cause someone just so perfect can't be single all the time. While they arrived at the party I was suprised his gf cheated on him, lol didn't see it coming (till he went upstairs looking for him)

    but good thing he found her in the act, even though that left him heartbroken. I hope he didn't just use Violet as a rebound. anyways.... I'm subcribing! and hoping you update soon again, cause I'm looking foward to reading more of these two. well done so far :)
    March 6th, 2014 at 01:33pm
  • xDiscoBallx

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    ooh I like this! Very interesting dynamic that you are playing with. Update soon!
    January 24th, 2014 at 01:11pm
  • rizzoabby

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    Awww this was a sad one :( I feel so bad for Violet. That would be so hard to love someone and be vulnerable with them especially after how he acted the next morning! Hopefully he'll come to his senses and realize he took advantage of her feelings in the moment.
    January 24th, 2014 at 03:50am
  • powerofkisses

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    WHAT? He doesn't even remember!! What a jerk face :(
    January 23rd, 2014 at 07:57pm
  • silk tea.

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    Oh god I can't imagine being in an unrequited love relationship with Tom. That would be too hard because he's too perfect and just ugh. And Sophie might possibly be the dumbest person in the world. And just, ugh. I'm having too many feelings about this story right now.
    January 15th, 2014 at 11:00pm
  • rizzoabby

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    yayyy I'm glad they finally had a chance to act on their feelings but I'm worried Tom did it out of pain and will regret it later. They are so cute though so I'm hoping it works out :) Thanks for updating!
    January 15th, 2014 at 08:55am
  • headrushxreeta

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    Uh oh all kinds of mischief and naughty stuff going on in this chapter. I had a feeling Sophie was going to cheat at some point but definitely wasnt expecting it so soon, I like that you caught me by surprise. I hope Tom loves Violet the way she does him But I know it's gonna be more complicated than that (which is good, I love reading drama). Really liking this story
    January 11th, 2014 at 06:05pm
  • piercethecharlie

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    I get the feeling that their relationship won't be all that simple. The detail is great and well written, in my personal opinion there's just the right amount. Just like your Pete Wentz story, this one has really captured my attention. The whole best friend's thing did it for me.

    I'll be following this one as well because I really want to see this unfold. Great job! :)
    January 11th, 2014 at 01:37am
  • powerofkisses

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    I hope this isn't end bad for her :(
    January 10th, 2014 at 07:23pm
  • sharpiewashere

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    Poor Tom Sad I hope when he's sober again his feelings haven't changed for Violet. Can't wait for the next update!
    January 10th, 2014 at 05:51am
  • rizzoabby

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    I'm so glad to see an update for this story! I really like where it's going and the added drama of Tom's gf. I hope they get together obviously so it will be fun to see where you take it :)
    January 7th, 2014 at 06:47am
  • hiwagang hapis

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    I like this a lot tehe

    I'm a huge fan of stories about best friends because it's just so touching, you know? I love the relationship between Tom and Violet, by the way.

    Gosh, I just want to push their faces together and say "NOW KISS." Something like that.

    I'm so jealous of their intimate relationship with each other (I think I mentioned this already?) In addition to the perfection that is this story, it's almost grammatically perfect!

    He went back to the couch and sat down, watching Violet struggling with a corkscrew to get the bottle open.
    Struggling should be struggle instead, in order to match the tense.

    You, my dear, have reached perfection with this story.

    By the way, to tell the truth, I found this story while I was going on my daily routine/job everyday and read it right then and there (practically forgetting the pile of work that I had). But I'm a silent reader by nature so I didn't comment on it. Then, unfortunately, I forgot the title until you commented on my blog and I read the story again. Now I was able to comment! Yay for yay! Crazy
    December 26th, 2013 at 05:22pm
  • rizzoabby

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    Read this after reading your other Tom story and I'm glad to see it is just as great! Seems really cool far :)
    December 24th, 2013 at 07:09am
  • tabula rasa.

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    @ January Rose
    Yes it is!
    December 21st, 2013 at 02:51pm