Running from the Rain - Comments

@ everdeen
Hahaha, that was awesome.

And I know, I'm sorry. :( Now you can just love Halvo and John equally instead of picking sides, so that has to be a good thing, right?! Ha.

This chapter was the epitome of cuteness, it was like all the chick flicks without the cheesy elements. When Charlee said why she likes John... her speech was pure effortless sincere love. I'm in love for them.

Finally John realized that there's relationships after Jenna!

PS: If I knew this story would happen I would set my mind into team Eric straight ahead on the previous story haha

(Before I give you my thoughts about chapter 15, I have to comment something about the 14)

"Well John, should I be offended that you clearly don't like me enough if you aren't willing to be with me like you should be?"
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my reaction, exactly

What is going on?! Can they just get together since they already are in everyone's head already? I want to pull my hair sometimes with all the push-pull these two go through. Gah.

And yes! Eat chicken (always), don't be one.

CAN THEY JUST GET TOGETHER ALREADY. DANG IT.
I love this<3

I have nothing to say other than I'm exploding with feels so thanks for that. Haha. As always, can't wait for the next update!!

i'm so excited for the next updates!!

So, like... yo John, I get you're scared and shit like that but you know, you can't act like a boyfriend and then be like "I don't want to be in a relationship" that ain't cool. It doesn't work that way. You can't get butt hurt or any other kind of hurt over this because you put it upon yourself. So, I know you got a pair-- please utilize them and you know-- do what you want to do and not have fear hold you back. Basically, eat chicken... don't be a chicken.

One step forward (with so much hope), two steps back (with fists shaking in the air). Gah, you two... the feels you give me (good and bad-- I actually want to give the finger to you both right now, but that may mostly be because I haven't eaten yet).

As always you wonderful person you... thank you for the wonderful update that illicted feelings and things. WILL THERE EVER BE STEADY HOPE FOR THESE TWO?! Halvo got his happy ending... John should too. Boy has been through enough! Karma can't be that horrible to him.

John, John, John, why must you be so stupid? Acting like you're her boyfriend but not putting a title on it? Of course she's going to get sassy with you. Make things right immediately (and by right I mean maker her your girlfriend, dang it!). Gosh, typical boy haha

This story I swear...YOU'RE GIVING ME ANXIETY WOMAN! dang...their relationship is so frustrating. Like you said, one step forward, two steps back. Gah...well, as always, anxiously awaiting the next update. I can't wait to see what's in store for these two...all the feels man....wow.

PS: all my love for these stories ❤️

Is it getting hotter in here or is it just me? Jeez... Someone is getting laid (!!!!) *fangirling inside*

John can't keep his hands or lips off her, step by step the wall he built around his heart is breaking.

YES CHARLEE! You go girl, so classy the way she stepped up like "hey, this is my man" and then telling what she's thinking to John /insert applause
I hate the expression "wear the pants" because it's totally sexist, so I'm gonna say SHE'S THE FREAKING QUEEN of this relationship.

This chapter was like Tyrion Lannister: short, hot and sweet

The hope... the stupidity of John... all of it. The feels... the feels... oh the feels.

Also, it's not good lying to people and saying nice things about me and my writing that are untrue hahahaha. But either way, thank you <3 love love love.

HAPPY FEELS! HAPPY FEELS! HAPPY FEELS! oh my god ive been waiting for that to happen for a while!!! Thank you thank you thank you! (i seem to be in a "must say everything in threes" mode...haha) anyway, wow. Thank you for this chapter. Thank you John and Charlee for pulling your heads out of the sand for more than 5 seconds and finally owning up to your feelings. About damn time! However, I have a gut feeling there'll soon be trouble in paradise...they're both so stubborn and too much alike...

PS, thanks for the promo. You're a rockstar :) much love <3

As always, you should listen to your mom John, mothers know best.

Nothing better than stay in bed all day when it's rainy.

The Maine is really out of this world, 33 days to see they play live!!! ❤️

Charlee, make your move, tiger, bring the flirting!

I love them *sigh*

I listened to the record and... I won't lie (I was a bit letdown to). But maybe it'll grow on me. A lot of things tend to grow on me but it takes a bit of time. Let's see if it does. At least we have the older albums to hold us over. Man, now I want to listen to the older album for nostalgia sake.

With that being said onto important things... a la this story....

The emotions I am feeling. Gah, Mama O'Callaghan totally gives me hope in this chapter. I don't need to wait till the next chapter for hope. She gave me some. "Mhm, so she's already not like Jenna." You got that right. She dropped some knowledge on his ass.

"Sometimes it honestly felt too real even for her."-- GIRL, IT IS REAL.

But I feel the progression! I feel it and I am excited for it! Wooo!!!!!!! I will go celebrate by getting a snack.

Thank you for being awesome and writing this. All the heart emojis for you.

The feels I'm getting from this story are way too intense. Wow. I'm loving this!!! So SO hilly that they're finally starting to become less stubborn and finally admit how they feel!!! I was about to get all mom and be like "guys, get your shit together and admit how you feel already!!" But you did that for me (sorta) with that Mama O scene. Thanks for that. Haha. She basically is saying what I've been saying in my head to John. So yay. I'm just so excited for them to finally make this thing happen for real ya know?? Anyway, I may have audibly squealed when I got outta my 1:00 class to see you updated this early. Thank you!!!

Ahhhhhh, this story makes me so happy! Thank-you for the update bubs, you're an amazing writer x

I was afraid Charlee would spill the truth about their "fake" relationship soon to be real.

Both of them struggling to not admit their feelings makes everything complicated, they won't do it unless there is a situations that force them to it.

I would like to see Jenny meeting her. Mothers always have a feeling about people, it would be funny reading it.

I just want John and Charlie to stop being stupid and stubborn and just admit their feelings for each other!