A Lonely Year - Comments

  • hephaestus

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    I want you to know that not only did this piece move me, it made me cry. Perhaps its because I fear that one day this will happen to me with a boy I love very much. I pushed him away, and I know I love him, and if I ever tried to reach out one day, he will not be mine any more. Perhaps it was the song I was listening to at the time (Holocene by Bon Iver). But either way, I cried a frightful amount. This was utterly beautiful, so thank you.
    January 26th, 2014 at 08:11pm
  • spencer hastings.

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    Goddammit, lady. Stop being so talented. Everything that you write is perfect and breathtaking. I am always in awe. I wish I could write like you.
    January 26th, 2014 at 10:34am
  • Mogar

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    Whoa, dude. That was just... wow Cry In Love
    December 26th, 2013 at 03:35pm
  • What...

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    I swear you just get better and better everytime Swoon

    It’s been a lonely year.
    December 23rd, 2013 at 07:59am
  • kyojin;

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    A lot of your stuff is sad and leaves me with this heavy impression but this is by far the fucking saddest, most heartaching thing I've ever read by you. And I hate myself a little for loving you for it. How fucking dare you?! THE TEARS THE TEEEEAAARRRRSSS!!! Cry Cry Cry HOW DARE THEY NOT WORK IT OUT!!
    December 22nd, 2013 at 10:56pm
  • wonderyear?

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    This just tore my little heart into pieces. It's 2am here and I'm seriously about to cry.Crying or Very sad

    You don’t know what else to say that doesn't sound like, I’m utterly lost without the sound of your voice. Drunken sorrow always seems to hurt the most.

    God, that entire paragraph gave me shivers. So much emotion with so few words. Absolutely loved everything about those two sentences.

    He's so sad I just wan to give him a hug. I'm so attached to Augustus (that's his name right?) already. He's trying so hard. Cry Love sucks.

    I'm tearing up. I can't take this. This was just perfect. Very good job.
    December 22nd, 2013 at 08:32am