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  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

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    @ XOXOnyx
    You are definitely not on my hit list lol. This is a co-write that unfortunately got canceled because of my co-writer had a lot going on and had to stop writing for a while. I hear she's giving Jocelyn her own story soon. Thanks for commenting :)
    March 4th, 2015 at 10:11pm
  • XOXOnyx

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    Oh my god! I new the minute the cat was introduced she was going to try to kill it, and it left this horrible queasy feeling in the pit of my stomach. I'm so glad her mom stopped, I mightve cried! P

    I actually felt really bad for Mac bec it's like she really doesn't have control, like she's not imagining it. I almost want to believe that she's not crazy, but she is.

    And I just feel bad for Reagan, yet I dont. She killed her sister, yet she kind of doesn't admit it to herself. She's const in agony like an itchy sweater, imagining her sister harassing her. I couldn't imagine living like that.

    As for Jocelyn I'm not really sure how to feel about her, she's bat shit crazy, obviously. But I don't really feel like she's done anything outstandingly crazy yet, she kind of just intimidates people but that's it. Though it's quite obvious she would grow up to be a homicidal maniac, like her father. Lol

    I don't usually read much outside of the fantasy/romance area, though I'm always willing to try any story, but I really love this story.You did a wonderful job creating the mind set of the little girls,and creating the atmosphere. it felt like the little girls were real, and I was in the story watching it all happen. I want to know more about the girls! I hope you're still writing this Very Happy

    Oh and, DOWN WITH WILLOW! *please don't kill me*
    March 4th, 2015 at 09:38pm
  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

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    @ Mrs. McCarron
    Jocelyn is a creepy bitch, lol. And one little tip, never ever go play hide-and-seek with her. Wink haha I'll let the suspense to the talking now. Thanks for commenting.
    August 26th, 2014 at 10:59pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Not to state the obvious, but there can be nothing good in Jocelyn's plan. That little bitch is creepy. Lol. Poor Reagan; I hate to think what's going to happen to her during a game of hide-and-seek in the dark. Shocked
    August 26th, 2014 at 11:05am
  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

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    @ Mrs. McCarron
    Thanks for commenting. There's no telling what Willow has in store for Mac. :)
    July 30th, 2014 at 12:37am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    So Mac makes some progress and actually tells the truth about Willow and, of course, now she's hearing the bear talking to her again...which will probably cause her to clam up. That poor little girl. And I'm not gonna lie: if I was that doctor, I'd be scared of those girls, too. I don't know why kids in this kind of setting are so much creepier than adults, but they are. =) Keep up the great work, y'all!
    July 29th, 2014 at 09:09am
  • Endportal Kitten

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    Thank you so much. I am glad enjoy the story. She is my favorite as well. Lol
    January 26th, 2014 at 02:16pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    All of the girls are eerie in their own way, but Jocelyn is my favorite. I just really enjoy the way she's written. I can only imagine what all will unfold with the three of them together now. I'm so excited! Lol.
    January 26th, 2014 at 11:34am
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    @ Lulie Belle
    Yes!!!!
    January 25th, 2014 at 07:45pm
  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

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    @ Lokison.
    We feel bad for Reagan too. There'll be a new chapter soon hopefully.
    January 25th, 2014 at 07:15pm
  • JckWhite

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    Once more I get to enjoy these characters all in one chapter :) Written wonderfully and in the right amount of creepy. Honestly I feel sorry for Regan for some reason :( I want to know what's wrong with the poor girl.

    Oh gods not the teddy bear!!! Why did they give her the bear to take?! Bad idea!!!

    Joycelyn gives me the creeps, she's weird and the way things were with her father makes me shiver in fear of what goes on in her tiny head.

    Really great chapter and can't wait for the next one :)
    January 25th, 2014 at 04:39pm
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    @ domi823
    Nothing can be good with all of them together ;-) It's going to be a wild ride!
    January 25th, 2014 at 04:57am
  • Dom.

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    Ooooo! They all met and now I sense some serious drama will happen >:)
    January 24th, 2014 at 08:01pm
  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

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    @ Vampire's_Addiction
    :D I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading, and there's much more creepiness to come :)
    January 11th, 2014 at 12:34am
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    This is so good, I love how creepy it is and how each girl is twisted in a different way! .... I can't wait to see where this goes!
    January 11th, 2014 at 12:12am
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    @ Mrs. McCarron
    Thank you. It means a lot to both of us Very Happy
    January 7th, 2014 at 05:00pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Oh yeah...definitely the creepiest child so far. Shocked I got chills just reading this. I agree with Forever.In.Ink. "Stellar" is the only word for this. Mr. Green
    January 7th, 2014 at 11:50am
  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

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    @ Forever.In.Ink
    Cute thank you.
    January 6th, 2014 at 07:19pm
  • Forever.In.Ink

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    *Shivers!* I hate loving this story more and more you ladies are stellar c:
    January 6th, 2014 at 07:13pm
  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

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    @ Ailurophile
    She's our favorite :).
    January 6th, 2014 at 06:45pm