March 4th, 2015 at 10:11pm
Oh my god! I new the minute the cat was introduced she was going to try to kill it, and it left this horrible queasy feeling in the pit of my stomach. I'm so glad her mom stopped, I mightve cried! P
I actually felt really bad for Mac bec it's like she really doesn't have control, like she's not imagining it. I almost want to believe that she's not crazy, but she is.
And I just feel bad for Reagan, yet I dont. She killed her sister, yet she kind of doesn't admit it to herself. She's const in agony like an itchy sweater, imagining her sister harassing her. I couldn't imagine living like that.
As for Jocelyn I'm not really sure how to feel about her, she's bat shit crazy, obviously. But I don't really feel like she's done anything outstandingly crazy yet, she kind of just intimidates people but that's it. Though it's quite obvious she would grow up to be a homicidal maniac, like her father. Lol
I don't usually read much outside of the fantasy/romance area, though I'm always willing to try any story, but I really love this story.You did a wonderful job creating the mind set of the little girls,and creating the atmosphere. it felt like the little girls were real, and I was in the story watching it all happen. I want to know more about the girls! I hope you're still writing this
Oh and, DOWN WITH WILLOW! *please don't kill me*
You are definitely not on my hit list lol. This is a co-write that unfortunately got canceled because of my co-writer had a lot going on and had to stop writing for a while. I hear she's giving Jocelyn her own story soon. Thanks for commenting :)