Dead Inside - Comments

I just read all of this and I love it ^.^ the characters are amazing and the chapters are super well written. The story is believable and awesome. I can't wait for more.

I absolutely agree with the comment below, how do you have ony a couple of comments when this is so great? obviously you have some silent readers. I'm only on chapter 3, but I read it in one sitting and decided I needed to let you know how good this is. It's hard writing in different POV's, I'm writing a story that's in different POV's each chapter (but 1st
Person) but yours is so well done so that you can differentiate between the characters. Your writing flows super well and is beautiful as well. Brilliant, I am definitely reading more.

I absolutely agree with the comment below, how do you have ony a couple of comments when this is so great? obviously you have some silent readers. I'm only on chapter 3, but I read it in one sitting and decided I needed to let you know how good this is. It's hard writing in different POV's, I'm writing a story that's in different POV's each chapter (but 1st
Person) but yours is so well done so that you can differentiate between the characters. Your writing flows super well and is beautiful as well. Brilliant, I am definitely reading more.

I absolutely agree with the comment below, how do you have ony a couple of comments when this is so great? obviously you have some silent readers. I'm only on chapter 3, but I read it in one sitting and decided I needed to let you know how good this is. It's hard writing in different POV's, I'm writing a story that's in different POV's each chapter (but 1st
Person) but yours is so well done so that you can differentiate between the characters. Your writing flows super well and is beautiful as well. Brilliant, I am definitely reading more.

HOW DOES THIS HAVE ONLY 14 SUBSCRIBERS. LIKE HONESTLY. AND ONLY ONE COMMENT.
I've been reading this since about chapter 3 or 4, and now I feel bad for never commenting. Cause I think this story is amazing, and the point of views are all so different. You can tell they're written by separate people, but there's still a cohesiveness and everything flows well together.
Excellent, excellent. Keep up the good work.

Wow... the imagery portrayed in the summary is just fantastic! You're such an emotive writer! Loving it :D xxxx