February 22nd, 2014 at 07:30pm
I love demon/angel stories, and your one is no exception, it has great potential, I love your layout and I love the fact that the main character is called Angel
Only thing that I'd point out is that there's no need to have the chapter in the title "CH1:" etc it isn't necessary. I know it's not a big thing but yeah, it'd make your story look better. :)
I love demon stories! Aw I love Lucky already. Of God, he cut her hair! I would never let someone chop my hair off. Xaryx is a strange but cool name. I love all the characters in here! Ohmygod they know her secret now. I hate that she's all scratched and bruised up. Aww I love the Lucky's gonna go get her cats for her.
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