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  • Corinne Patricia

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    I love love love your story!!
    Kinda sketchy about the soul owning, i couldn't really follow but i love it.
    January 16th, 2014 at 12:36pm
  • LyttleSynyster

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    Omg I need more this is amazing
    January 5th, 2014 at 09:51pm
  • Killjoy Shadows

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    omg just found this story <3 it
    January 5th, 2014 at 02:48pm
  • Metalwhore

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    Uuuh gotta hate Blaine. He's a dick. Matt and Asher are so cute together, update soon please!
    January 5th, 2014 at 10:43am
  • RavenArtist93

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    Oh man things are going to get crazy.
    Blaine is such a dick :U
    I'm looking forward to Matt and Asher's intimate relationship when it comes by :)
    January 5th, 2014 at 05:17am
  • jesus christ.

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    all caught up now! (: this is really good. my only suggestion is to maybe space things out just a little more, only because that makes it a lot easier to read. you've developed your characters really well and i'm a huge fan.
    one other slip up in this chapter!
    He said aloud but not for Asher, for himself. There was silence between them as they held each other. Zacky inched his face closer to hers and pressed a finger under her chin.
    you left zacky's name.
    otherwise, this is incredibly good!
    January 3rd, 2014 at 01:28am
  • jesus christ.

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    hi, i just started reading and i adore it! finding a well written sevenfold story is almost impossible.
    i'll comment again when i catch up, but i wanted to suggest my matt story called goodbye to romance. it's sort of active, haha.
    January 3rd, 2014 at 12:36am
  • Metalwhore

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    Aww, Matt can be so cute when he isn't an ass. I love this story, please update soon!
    January 2nd, 2014 at 11:07am
  • brady07

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    Omg I love this story please keep updating because it's a new favourite :)
    January 2nd, 2014 at 10:55am
  • RavenArtist93

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    This story is so good!
    I just love it.
    Its dark, cynical, but yet I could feel the tension of romance building up.
    This is really awesome :)
    Please more! :D
    January 2nd, 2014 at 02:44am
  • simply amanda;

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    I really love this story! I can't wait for more, so please update as as soon as you can!!! ^_^
    January 1st, 2014 at 03:32pm
  • Metalwhore

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    I love this so far! Update soon please!
    January 1st, 2014 at 12:40pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I am already loving this story! Please update soon!
    January 1st, 2014 at 03:15am
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