The Two Lives of Jerrod Maine - Comments

  • EmptySighsAndWine

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    @ Ritha
    I should be updating either this evening or tomorrow. I've already got the next chapter halfway written out.
    September 16th, 2014 at 10:15am
  • Ritha

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    I love this story, it's so good! please update as soon as you can cause this is gold
    September 16th, 2014 at 08:21am
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    @ Deek8400
    Thank you. I'll try to update when I get the chance. I've been so busy lately that it's really crazy. ^^; Hopefully there'll be more and more of the story soon.
    September 1st, 2014 at 02:36am
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    Oh! I really really love this story!! Please update soon!!
    August 31st, 2014 at 11:56pm
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    @ fiction246
    Haha, I know. Zaire was actually a last minute addition though if you couldn't tell.
    July 23rd, 2014 at 12:06am
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    Well those brothers have a great relationship :P
    July 22nd, 2014 at 10:31am
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    @ fiction246
    BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I told you I had big plans. This even the last of it.
    July 18th, 2014 at 12:03am
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    Thank god it was only a dream!!! And Xiro has a brother?!?
    July 17th, 2014 at 09:48am
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    @ fiction246
    I don't even think he knows anymore.
    July 14th, 2014 at 02:06pm
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    What is Jerrod doing?!?
    July 14th, 2014 at 08:48am
  • fiction246

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    I hope Jerrod doesn't get into trouble now!!! Oh my goodness!!!
    July 8th, 2014 at 05:35am
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    Poor Garth!!! I hope he gets help and starts feeling better!!!
    July 3rd, 2014 at 11:29am
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    So Lucas and Xiro should just get together and leave Garth and Jerrod alone :P looking forward to more :)
    June 27th, 2014 at 08:53am
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    Poor Garth!!! I don't like that we don't know where Lucas is!!! I'm scared!!!
    June 24th, 2014 at 08:41am
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    Will they be okay now? I hope so!!! Oh my goodness I hope so!!!
    June 19th, 2014 at 10:02am
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    Oh my gosh :) he said Garth's name!!! Well I'm glad he isn't going to do anything with Rusty anymore!!! Looking forward to more :)
    June 13th, 2014 at 10:00am
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    @ shukketsushi
    Thank you very much. Let me say, to get something like I'm writing now, it's taken years of practice. I still sometimes read my old writing and I have trouble trying to figure out how I got from that to where I am today.
    June 8th, 2014 at 07:58pm
  • shukketsushi

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    I really like the idea, but I'm not quite sure yet if it's my cup of tea. Your writing style is really interesting and mature. The sex scenes are done tastefully. They don't come off as awkward or trashy, like a lot of the erotica/romance stuff you can find in today's market. It's really hard (in my opinion) to write tasteful sex scenes, so I'm really impressed by that. I also really like the idea of Jarrod trying to come to terms with Jenine. The transition is striking but somehow natural at the same time. It's awesome.
    June 8th, 2014 at 11:51am
  • fiction246

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    Crap!!! I hope his dad isn't going to be a douche!!! Looking forward to more :)
    June 7th, 2014 at 07:09am
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    Oh my gosh!!! I can't believe Garth has to watch them :( I hope Jerrod can find a way to get him out!!!
    June 3rd, 2014 at 11:33am