The Two Lives of Jerrod Maine - Comments

@ Ritha
I should be updating either this evening or tomorrow. I've already got the next chapter halfway written out.

I love this story, it's so good! please update as soon as you can cause this is gold

@ Deek8400
Thank you. I'll try to update when I get the chance. I've been so busy lately that it's really crazy. ^^; Hopefully there'll be more and more of the story soon.

Oh! I really really love this story!! Please update soon!!

@ fiction246
Haha, I know. Zaire was actually a last minute addition though if you couldn't tell.

Well those brothers have a great relationship :P

@ fiction246
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I told you I had big plans. This even the last of it.

Thank god it was only a dream!!! And Xiro has a brother?!?

@ fiction246
I don't even think he knows anymore.

What is Jerrod doing?!?

I hope Jerrod doesn't get into trouble now!!! Oh my goodness!!!

Poor Garth!!! I hope he gets help and starts feeling better!!!

So Lucas and Xiro should just get together and leave Garth and Jerrod alone :P looking forward to more :)

Poor Garth!!! I don't like that we don't know where Lucas is!!! I'm scared!!!

Will they be okay now? I hope so!!! Oh my goodness I hope so!!!

Oh my gosh :) he said Garth's name!!! Well I'm glad he isn't going to do anything with Rusty anymore!!! Looking forward to more :)

@ shukketsushi
Thank you very much. Let me say, to get something like I'm writing now, it's taken years of practice. I still sometimes read my old writing and I have trouble trying to figure out how I got from that to where I am today.

I really like the idea, but I'm not quite sure yet if it's my cup of tea. Your writing style is really interesting and mature. The sex scenes are done tastefully. They don't come off as awkward or trashy, like a lot of the erotica/romance stuff you can find in today's market. It's really hard (in my opinion) to write tasteful sex scenes, so I'm really impressed by that. I also really like the idea of Jarrod trying to come to terms with Jenine. The transition is striking but somehow natural at the same time. It's awesome.

Crap!!! I hope his dad isn't going to be a douche!!! Looking forward to more :)

Oh my gosh!!! I can't believe Garth has to watch them :( I hope Jerrod can find a way to get him out!!!