Make Me Feel Alive - Comments

I read the first story and this one and I fell inlove with it right off the back. I hope you continue with this story cuz it's just too amazing to be left alone without a proper ending. Just keep writing these awesome chapters :]

I found this sequel and the first one last night and I read every chapter up until the current chapter. I am hooked! Pun intended! You are a fabulous writer and I love your details and descriptions! I can't wait to see what comes of this story. I know how it is to become disinterested in the subject matter your writing about. It's super hard to make yourself write. Hope to read more soon!

I just started reading this story (actually I stayed up until a little past 4:30am reading both I Hope You Suffer and Make Me Feel Alive) I am hooked! haha

Although when I first started reading Make Me Feel Alive I thought it was going to be a lot different.
For example since it has been 28 years that she's been with Peter and that's more time than she's spent with anybody else (If I recall correctly she was 26 when she first arrived to Neverland and she only spent a few weeks with Killian) I thought she would have gotten some sort of Stockholm Syndrome. She would have been Tiger Lilly Longer than Amira. Maybe she would have felt something for Killian, but not recalled who he was and put up a much bigger struggle in trying to stay with Peter. Eventually Jiminy Cricket/Archie would have helped her recall her memories before Neverland and so forth)

However, I really want to find out about the deal that Rumplestiltskin made with Amira's father though. And of course how everything will play out with time. Intense feelings are hard to forget and Killian is intense all over!

Also, "You went and fell in love with that?” FAVORITE! I can't stand Emma.

Withdrawals are coming after a month of not reading this story i think i need to benge read again just to satisfy my addiction for this story.

Just found your story been on a nonstop reading benge for two days I am compleatly in love with this story. Can't wait for the next update.

Ahhh!!!!!! You're back!

hahah I was starting to wonder if you had followed the white rabbit down the rabbit hole or something as fun as that and actually was about to send you a message on here to check on you and then bham- update

bahaha Killian drugged Amira to get her onto his ship and then waking up she met with Ruby! Well so happy it was her actually! Ruby is awesome

agree with snow white looking like a man..
henry is still a boring kid..
the wicked witch- her ''smile'' is making my skin crawl..
i'm actually happy that pan is gone (hides)
and I loved it- couldn't wait for a new ep. AND the season finale.. YOU BETTER WATCH IT I'M TELLIN' YOU YOU'LL LOVE IT (esp. for two reasons)
can't wait for season 4 now..
and yeah.. killian.. holy pirate

I'm happy that you are back!

The update was wonderful.
Now Amira is in Storybrooke. I wonder how she is going to adapt.

The Wicked Witch addition to the show is actually really good. It was hard warming up to her because I was in love with Peter.
Plot twists of the show kept me watching though.

The new season is gonna be so awesome.
I still need to watch the season finale though.

I am happy to read your stuff again.
I was waiting for you. :)

Girl, go for it. Don't drive yourself crazy wondering about what might have happened. Be the strong woman that you are and take that chance!
Girlfriend or not, he went out of his way to talk to you. Clearly, if he did that, he wants you in his life, and from the sounds of it, as more than just a friend. I think you should just go for the plunge. Ask him to coffee.

That aside, this chapter made me tear up on countless occasions. I actually read it three times to fully feel the full extent of it.Such beautiful writing. It shows the dark side of Peter, but it still shows that he cares for Amira. If he didn't he would have just killed her. I couldn't imagine the sacrifice that Killian had to make to leave. Leaving the one you love forever? My heart breaks thinking about it. So lovely, <3

I say life is too short to sit around and say "what if?"...this man could be your future, your ever after but the only way you'll find out is if you take that leap. If you two stay friends then that's ok but you'll never know till you do something about it. You don't have to be the other woman, you can make that clear to him. But if he chooses you over her, let him make that choice.

I think you should catch up with him after all the missed time. Life is about taking risks and I think that you should. Not everything is easy. You may also get the answer if he is seeing someone. Just hope for the best. If he is still with the girl, at least you still asked. Do not miss an opportunity for him to make you smile. :)

This chapter was full of heart jerking moments. I love the fact that Killian told her what happened. I hate the fact that Gold killed her mother because her father wished it. I hate Tinker Bell. Peter is just a sly man. I also adore how you made Regina the fairest and not Snow because I think that too. So many feelings in this chapter and I love how you capture moments. <3

okay this might sound dumb but I think you kind of owe(?) yourself to see him- to catch up with him.. you said it yourself you've been friends before he left for school and if you don't meet up with him to at least catch up you'd regret it later on.. and then you might just get the answer to if he really is single or not there's always the risk of getting hurt- but then again you could hurt yourself by not meeting him- with the what if's that are sure to pop out later on..

and as for the story..
KILLIAN FINALLY TOLD HER WHY HE HAD TO LEAVE HER AND THAT HE LOVES HER!!!
wiiiihooo!! been waiting for that!
and think it's good that she didn't just forgive him and stuff- because she's had 28 years to hate him- to question why.. that's not going to go away even if she does know the truth.. but I do hope that he'll manage to convince amira to come with them to storybrook..

do agree with her when it comes to neil though..
and tinker bell.. pmsl! not many women likes amira
woah wait.. her dad made a deal with mr.gold to kill amiras mother? wtf??????????????

AND THE HELLATUS IS FINALLY OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOLY SHIT HAVE I MISSED KILLIAN OR WHAT?
this story sure is what got me through the hellatus- this and the prequel <3
hahahah missed him so bad that I had to have Colin in one of my A7X stories.. lmao

I really like this!

Gah! Amira!
So dangerous playing with Peter like that :/
I just hope she doesn't get hurt!!
Loved the update :)

oh my gosh! maybe he lives by the code that a little flirting doesn't harm anyone? jeez sucks that he's married though.. what about the other two?

gah... peter... totally understand why she plays along and stuff- but I still don't like him

mmmm.. angry, upset, pissed off, murderous and turned on Hook..

OOOH OOH ME!! I'M LOOKIN' FORWARD TO NEXT WEEK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i've been going during this hellatus..

and mister colin totally made me turn off all sound and vibrations on my phone the other night.. follow him on twitter and got the settings for his tweets so that I get them as texts on my phone and well it's a little bit of time difference so when he tweeted from a hockey game I tried to sleep.. he scared the crap outta me..

Flirting with a married man? How daring. It seems like one of those Lifetime movies. Bahaha. It is his fault that he didn't tell you so don't fret.

I am excited for OUAT to come back. I plan to stay home when I get off from work and glue myself to the tv until it comes on. So excited! I am also gonna be doing live blogging on Tumblr. I always do when I get a chance to watch the show when it airs on tv. :)

Now comments for the story.
Ooh, a little attention from Peter is always nice. ;)
Sigh. I would love to be in Amira's position.
Two attractive men wanting her. So nice.

Then the moment with Killian made my heart race.
I actually held my breath as I was reading. Hahaha.

I can't wait for more!
<3

PS. Those Disney Dudez guys are amazing. They are called IM5. Cuties for sure and they sing very well. I am in love with them for sure. Haha. :3

PS. Those Disney Dudez guys are amazing. They are called IM5. Cuties for sure and they sing very well. I am in love with them for sure. Haha. :3

As for Disney princess, I really don't have a favorite.
But if you go for anyone, I do love Nala even though she was turned Queen after being with Simba... To be technical. Also, Elsa was my... No, she was Queen. SO. No one. HAHA. I just love my queens. I would say Pocahontas, but she isn't a princess. No one I like are classified as princess.

So, comments to the story, I do feel bad for what Amira is going through. It seems like her heart is being torn. I want to punch Emma in the face because of reasons. I also want to punch Felix, but I love him. I have a love hate relationship with him.

Can't wait for the next update!

I love it :D After I read the story before this, I was not expecting that ending and since then I love this sequel that goes with it. :D Keep it up doll. Favorite Disney princess is definitely Pocahontas <3