Make Me Feel - Comments

I think you did a really good job writing. And it's kind of crazy how he didn't search for more
Information when they were together a year! Lol it's true you never did name him, he remains and no one but his thoughts stick to anyone who reads this.

@ discoveringclouds
Thanks for your comment, I appreciate it with all my heart! I know I'm a bit too exaggerating, but this is my first on getting comments on stories. I'm also really glad you enjoyed it, and I feel the same way as I write. I was mostly worried though, like about my grammar (it's the first time I tried to use present tense in first person) and all. To be honest, I got stuck on how to describe things more than once.

I left Alice with only so little background about her because a) It's actually (psst, spoiler) how the guy knows her, and b) I have no more idea about her background. I also realised just now that I haven't even named 'the guy'.

And indeed the guy said it was a perfect day... to 'do what he's gonna do'.

Anyway thank you again for the comment! :)

Very interesting story, although the end was definetly out of nowhere in a way. How he said it was a perfect day shocked me as I imagined him so well as ignoring everything. But the details with Alice were intriguing, and I was already reflecting on my own life. Now I think, what in my life have I been ignoring?

This was a nice read for the most part, the sad parts are obviously not nice lol!! Very emotional though, my heart feels chipped. I think you have a strong way with words. You really got me thinking about what I overlook in life.

I just wish he found something more at the end. Alice. <\3