Ignominy - Comments

This was an emotional drabble, and I feel like every segment was described perfectly to tell the story. You used repetition beautifully and that helped to draw me in to the drabble. Well done!

I love this drabble so much that I'm going to feature it in my drabble column in the Mibba Magazine

I really like the layout of this piece, with the repetition of "I'm/she's pregnant". It gives the story a more realistic tone, the disbelief and uncertainty portraying through those words. It's an excellent portrayal of a young woman going through the emotions and actions of learning she's pregnant.

It's very well written and I love the the incorporation of the prompt. Great work!

I really liked this. I liked that it was real, that it didn't hold anything back, and that it didn't give a definite ending - because sometimes leaving the ending to the reader is the greatest thing an author can do.

This was beautifully written. Very well done.