Happiest Place on Earth - Comments

  • MikGreen

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    Got super excited when I saw this update :D I love where this is going and I love Disney and it's amazing and keep updating and and and ... Yeah... Keep updating!
    April 2nd, 2014 at 05:25pm
  • MikGreen

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    So far I love this story! Can't wait to read more from you! Keep up the good work!! Very Happy
    March 31st, 2014 at 03:44pm
  • Shatterheart

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    I saw the picture of Flynn and Rapunzel so I just had to click this story. Weird

    I have to say, this isn't what I was expecting! In a good way, of course...and it's great because I haven't read anything like this before! That's exciting...especially when people's been complaining about lack of originality on Mibba in recent days. But you, my friend, you got it!! Romance in Disney? My, it is supposed to be the happiest place on earth!

    The layout is nice too---not too much, easy to read and fits with the story. (I mean, I think so, even though it;s still early into the story.)

    Since I like to be constructive, I will say that I'm not a fan of the centered writing; but that's my preference. I also struggled with how the beginning bit was structured; I had to re-read it to be clear of who said what.

    Overall, it's a good start and I can see that this has great potential!
    January 18th, 2014 at 10:41pm