The Cabin - Comments

@ Synful Cocktail
I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about I haven't logged onto this site in literally years lmfao.

@ silk tea.
I’m Australian, that’s how we spell tyres

Little JOhnny saved the day!!! *hugs the gnome*

I was getting so panicked half way through this chapter because I remember what we previously discussed about it and I was just "noooo, please don't kill them! sajflkdsajl"

BUT THEY SURVIVED! I'm so happy that at least some of the group managed to get out alive.

And I love that Para Gates organised a proper burial for them. Also glad you didn't put that part in because I would have sobbed like a baby

I'm very sorry to see this end now but I'm glad it ended on a somewhat happy note

fucking double post

Alright, so I'm just gonna comment as I read. Omg I started loving this as soon as you said Jimmy and Johnny were a couple. Jimohnny is my favorite A7X pairing and I love seeing them together in any story!

I'm loving this banter between Matt and Brian, they're so funny! But poor Mattie, he's still hung up on Brian. I just hope he didn't end up getting hurt - or hurting Evelyn - over this.

Oh gosh, what's going on between Matt and Brian? It was definitely a bad idea to put them in the same room. Oh shit, Brian's in trouble! I mean, the rest of them are too, but mostly Brian.

Poor Brian. He should know his friends are just kidding, but I can definitely understand why it would hurt more coming from his friends. Okay, so I know how I said I didn't want Matt to hurt Evelyn, but I want him and Brian together! They're totally adorable, and Matt really cares about Brian. Plus it seems like Matt is/was a positive influence on Brian.

I love Zacky's personality in this story. And his insults, good Lord. 'Stunned fucking mullet' and 'uncultured dick rocket' are two of my new favorite phrases

Ugh, Jimmy and Johnny are so cute in this story *squee* I'm gonna be so sad if/when they die. Omg, I bet they found Evelyn's body!

Yep.

Jeez! They didn't waste any time did they?

Oh no, now Riley's dead! I can't imagine...gosh, my heart is breaking for Matt and Zacky I'm sorry, but I would've freaked the fuck out if I saw a murderer - or anybody, really - outside my window! Ohmygoodness Zacky, you're so stupid. They're gonna find his body next, I know it! See, I knew it! Ugh Zacky, my poor baby.

OHMYGOODNESS WHY HAVEN'T THEY CALLED THE POLICE.

Jimmy and Johnny are so cute ugh I just wanna squeeze them both. I know I said that already, but whatever. Johnny better not be next!

NO NO NO NO NONONONONONONONONO.

Poor poor Jimmy! I know losing Johnny just liked him. And now he's gonna die next. Sigh. But at least he'll be with Johnny. Oh, and I'm super curious as to how Johnny actually met his maker.

How did she get Matt even when he was with Brian?! Shit, I would've given up at that point; I'dbe so scared I wouldn't be able to fucking move. At least Matt's not dead, but what's she gonna do to them?!

I ALWAYS KNEW JOHNNY WAS THE SMART ONE. But he still should've called the cops, jeez.

Wow, what a story! Thanks for steering me in this direction, I really enjoyed it! Sorry for the scattered comments, like I said I commented as I read ahaha. Anywho, wonderful job and thanks for entering my contest!

Awe! I love that it was Johnny that saved them, in a way. That would be me, the one who calls her parents every day. I guess maybe that's not such a bad thing, huh? Lol.

It's still devastating that they lost all of their friends, but the fact that the two of them survived--and that Faye got arrested--is a positive. I'm glad that this ended on a relatively happy note. I hate that it's over, because I adored this story, but this was a good ending. <3

I'm sad this is over but I'm happy they're still alive. Does this mean a sequel is coming or were you just wanting to end it on a somewhat happy note?

Just to let you know, the first part of the final chapter is posted twice( ch 18 & 19).

Fucking awesome, update soon!!!!!

Sorry for the double post

You can't just leave it there! Your cliffhangers are seriously killing me, ma'am! I'm gonna need you to stop that. Lol.

I'm so apprehensive about what comes next, though. This bitch is crazy! I can only imagine what she has planned for the two of them!

Even though I knew this was coming, I was hoping they'd be able to outsmart her some way. She's either insanely strong or not working alone, though, because even knocked out, those two aren't lightweights. For her to be able to get them from point A to point B on her own is amazing, and it makes it a bit easier to see how she was able to overpower everyone else.

I'm really intrigued now as to why she kept them both alive( unless she wants to kill Matt in front of Brian to torture him) because it seems like it would've been easier to just kill Matt outright or make Brian believe she killed him.

Poor Johnny! The bitch is a coward, killing him when Jimmy was asleep. Of course Jimmy would blame himself, but it really isn't his fault. They had to sleep at some point. Poor lamb D:

Dear lord, Jimmy, have you never read horror films 101?! You never go chasing after the crazy bitch who is trying to kill you!!

Also, I think Matt may have just signed his own death warrant, that's a promise he may not be able to keep. D:

OH MY GOD SHE GOT TO THEM!! Ahhhh, what is she going to do to them?! I'm guessing she's going to save Brian until last..

More soon, please, madam!

Oh Jimmy, why'd you have to go hunting the evil witch alone? I mean, I get why, but it doesn't seem like anyone can surprise her, no matter how hard they try. Matt/Bri should really wait until morning and come up with a plan, though neither seems willing to just let things happen. I agree with Mrs.McCarron - Matt said that to pacify Brian, but I'm doubtful it'll be true.

Sequel? That means psycho bitch's plan doesn't go as planned. That's exciting given her ability to do as much as she has already done. Here's hoping your muse is cooperative

I feel like Matt just made a promise he's not going to be able to keep. I know they are worried about Jimmy, but they should probably stick to their plan. They haven't managed to save anyone else; do they really think they're going to be able to change that trend with Jimmy?

@ Jackson Teller;
Thank you, so much. It means a lot to get this sort of feedback.

Can I just say, that I have missed a lot on this story! Dude this is insanely good. And of course :;tehe: I am hooked to this! You are an amazing writer!

@ vampire_sun
I was worried they they wouldn't.

@ Synful Cocktail
Yes, they fit nicely!

@ vampire_sun
No, they haven't. I thought I'd be cool and put them up there.. Do they fit/work?

Poor Johnny and Jimmy!

I understand Jimmy's mindset with wanting to get revenge, but Matt and Bri are right - it's not worth it right now. Plus, if he had waited, the three of them could have come up with a plan, and they would have had a better chance at getting her together versus individually. I just hope she makes a mistake or Jimmy surprises her.

Random question, have the chapters always had titles? I noticed them today and can't figure out if they're new or if I'm just highly unobservant.